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Giddy

It’s a dreary rainy day for everyone but she
Her heart overflows with joyful sunshine
An effervescence she cannot contain
She glows with giddy infatuation

The way she saunters on rainbow clouds
Thirsting hungering craving
All while bursting at the seams
Impossible to hide her exhilaration

Caught in a whirlwind of disarray
Undeniable the power he has over her
Her justifiably warranted adulation
An intensity that refuses to subside
Its sorcery exquisite and sublime



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Very well penned; it should do well in the contest, good luck.
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
May Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:41 PM
I wish I was the Judge it would be 1st place for sure, GREAT JOB, my friend
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Thank you, Bobby. You make me feel like a winner already.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:22 AM
The first line captured me and held me in arms of pure delight; the rest of the poem also, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Caren.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Oh Lu Loo's going to love this! I do :))) Good luck in the contest! xomo
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:49 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Maureen.
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