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Amphibian, Frog, Animal, Macro, Wood

"Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs; " Samuel Taylor Coleridge “Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs. . .” tiny life will pass, the listless morning hours. Hear the daytime whispers of the frogs and creatures rare. Many make a habitat among the shadows there. Let their nighttime mating calls send echoes to our souls amid the reeds and grassy marsh that round them all enfolds. As we move among them, let us honor their surrounds and cherish with a listening ear, the beauty of the sounds. Amid the autumn woods of brown that sometimes crack and sing you may just behold the beauty of most anything, as lovely tawny fawns appear with large inviting eyes behind the leafless trees of black beneath the pale grey skies. 11/29/19 'Impact and Metaphors' Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 10/3/2020 3:03:00 PM
A righteous rhythm patterns throughout, Janis, a soothing echo you have well-executed truly, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 12/26/2019 11:53:00 AM
Ahhh so, so good!
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Date: 12/23/2019 7:28:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Janis--congrats for being in the TOP tier of best poems chart.
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Date: 12/22/2019 11:11:00 PM
Seems like the line belongs to your poem.. The sounds of nature beautifully described..
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Date: 12/17/2019 6:21:00 AM
Oh so very nice.
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Date: 12/17/2019 6:20:00 AM
Oh so Nice Janis
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Date: 12/17/2019 5:36:00 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Janis - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 12/16/2019 2:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Janis
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Date: 12/5/2019 6:30:00 PM
Janis congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love your image too!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/8/2019 12:22:00 AM
Thanks Dear Heart. You always sponsor a stimulating, creative contest.
Date: 12/4/2019 12:40:00 PM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/8/2019 12:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/4/2019 5:00:00 AM
You are so wonderful at writing about nature Janis. This is exquisitely beautiful! I am putting it into my faves! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Have a splendid holiday! xxoo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/8/2019 12:24:00 AM
Wow Connie, A FAVE, Thanks so much my friend. You certainly know how to make a poem special to your heart. Thanks again with love and hugs, Janis.
Date: 12/3/2019 8:33:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Janis
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/8/2019 12:24:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory. Love and hugs...
Date: 12/3/2019 12:04:00 PM
Wow amazingly written my friend! Congratulations on your win!;)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/8/2019 12:25:00 AM
Thanks much with love and hugs Brenda.

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