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Amid Falling Leaves

Amid falling leaves from crimson colored trees I fall into your arms, lightly and lovingly As my heart is colored with pleasant feelings Of long awaited comfort and reassurance The leaves twirl as we dance in the motion That only this autumn time of year can bring I feel as bright as what seems like confetti Fluttering around, touching us, as I touch you In this restful understanding that only we know Heidi Sands 7/25/20 Placed 3rd in Pick a Title Vol 20 Free Verse 3 Poetry Contest. Title: Amid Falling Leaves

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/4/2020 12:34:00 PM

This one has a really soft and beautiful touch Heidi. Loved it. Congratulations on your win :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2020 1:01:00 PM

Thank you for the kind feedback and support Aditi :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/4/2020 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my contest with this superb poem, Heidi:-)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2020 1:00:00 PM

Thank you very much Edward :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/4/2020 7:47:00 AM

Good morning Heidi, Light hearts are special to us all. If only the trees had eyes and the wind had ears. Keep shining your light. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2020 11:54:00 AM

Hi Richard. Thank you very much . I hope your day is going well :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/4/2020 5:35:00 AM

Back with congrats Heidi on your well deserved win in the contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2020 11:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/2/2020 4:40:00 PM

Ohhh Heidi this is just beautiful and so romantic it makes me feel like I am floating and twirling too. Charming and delightful to read and I wish you good luck in the contest my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/2/2020 6:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Ann. I am happy to hear that. I appreciate your support and hope all is well :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/29/2020 10:55:00 AM

What a cute, loving poem my friend, whimsical and fluttering around like on the wings of a butterfly - love it, beautiful! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/29/2020 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for the kind feedback. I am happy to hear that. Blessings to you too ! Take care :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/28/2020 9:53:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I am not done with summer. I prefer summer.Wish it would last longer. Autumn is a beautiful season. I just do not like to rake leaves. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2020 11:02:00 AM

Hello Heidi I do like Autumn but not the raking of leaves. We still rake leave in November.Because the leaves on the trees take too long to fall. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2020 3:30:00 PM

Hi Darlene. Yes...I understand the raking leaves. I think I have one of the yards that gets the most and I always need help. Thank you for your comment. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/27/2020 5:30:00 PM

The first two lines are so tenderly romantic, and then the poem improves from there! Beautifully penned, Heidi! Joy and Light, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2020 3:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon. ! Joy and light to you too, my friend :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/27/2020 11:13:00 AM

Through your words, we can see this couple enjoying the falling leaves, Heidi. (This is my favorite season.) Like the way you describe the leaves as "confetti" falling all around them. Very nicely done! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2020 11:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for the nice comment Carolyn. I hope all is well. Hugs :)