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Amber-Repost

i remember you; giddy little child with the mona-lisa smile and sun-burnt hair as it brushed against your ivory skin you were so innocent then i never saw the sadness that lingered in your eyes the depths of green seemed to pull others in that hypnotizing glare hid your pain well they laughed with you yet in silence you cried muffled voice echoed on walls where darkness subdued your soul i heard you sold your soul on the corner of fifth and main for a small bag of pleasure to escape the pain momentarily again a lonely cat cried by your side he has nine lives you've already had ten yet there you go again unafraid, stained with your own blood the band still wrapped tight against your flesh needle tip still feeding your veins as you close your eyes and rest in shallow breaths i remember you; still as the air that august day that sunlit hair against grey skin blue lips without smile closed eyes pulling others in to the depths of your pain their cheeks stained with tears that bore your name as muffled cries echoed by your grave June 28, 2019 First Place Best free verse 2019 Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton Copyright © Sandra Adams | Year Posted 2019

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/10/2019 11:26:00 AM

Such an amazing write congrats on your first place win! This world is full of challenges we must all go through and this poem addiction is one almost everyone now days experience someway in our lives first hand or second hand! So sad but fact it seems any more! ;(

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/11/2019 7:59:00 PM

very sad to think about...

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/10/2019 9:48:00 PM

I know it's too sad to think about!;(

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/10/2019 4:38:00 PM

thank you...it is a sad fact all over the world today....so many falling...so many lost...but look at all the ugliness in this world these days...:(

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2019 5:03:00 AM

I have tears reading the poem Sandra, im sure others can relate to 'if only' it's so hard to come to terms with this tragic loss but i guess the grip of addiction is so strong and many turn to drugs to cope with other demons in their life. Adding this to my faves for so many reasons:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/10/2019 4:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan...i am honored that you faved this one...it's so hard to watch a generation slowly crumble....so many, not just here but all around the world...hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2019 8:14:00 AM

I am at a loss for words...sad, life is so precious and fragile. If only...pops into my mind. Your poem is wonderfully crafted like all of your work but it is so sad this one needed to be written.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/9/2019 8:42:00 AM

if only....we could reach people in their darkest moments, if only we knew... it did need to be written at the time... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 10/8/2019 10:33:00 AM

Remember her as the child, my friend...always. Sad when a momentary escape is our last moment ~ a poignant poem speaking volumes of our ignorance as a human species...so sorry for your loss. Congrats on the win...

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 10:57:00 AM

thank you so much my friend, she was in my son's wedding two years ago, she took selfies with everyone... no one knew the importance of them until she became a memory... so sad to see so many fall...countless children i have known through the years, that i have watched grow and then saw fall... sad is this world we live in now... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/8/2019 9:25:00 AM

A powerful write, Sandy..so sad, but it speaks to lives of so many. Excellent, as always--thank you for posting it.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay, it was one of the first poems i posted after coming back from a few years of absence... i wanted to add her photo and didn't know how without resposting the whole poem...i am still learning these new features... hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/8/2019 8:17:00 AM

I didn't realize you withdrew this one, keep it posted please this should be heard loud and clear by the world, brought another tear this day, no one writes like you do!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:04:00 AM

I didn't withdraw it, just wanted to add her photo and didn't know how without reposting it.... thank you John, for this kind comment and the win on this special piece! hugs :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/7/2019 11:03:00 PM

Sandra, Not easy to read..,harder to write I'm sure. So sad to lose someone, perhaps sadder to be the ones left behind? Left to pick up the pieces and go...on. -Richard

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:05:00 AM

Thank you Richard, last year we went to 10 out of 12 funerals...some family, some friends, some health or age related, some not.... Death is the sad part of life... hugs

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/7/2019 10:35:00 PM

This is spectacular. so happy you got 1st place. Yes, this poem will be cherished.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne, one of the first poems i wrote since coming back after a few years away....I was very happy it took first place too, and that was when my daughter-in-law first learned that i write poetry...it's not something i talk about with many...so many around me have no clue... hugs

Bobby May

Date: 10/7/2019 10:16:00 PM

This ripped my heart out!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:11:00 AM

sorry my friend...it was a sad moment..hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/7/2019 10:06:00 PM

First time, i've read this amazing dedication. Not often, does reading a poem, take my breath away, like this did. In Fact this penned poem of despair highlights so much regarding our world today, and should be made available to the media, to have it's message broadcast for all.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Harry...i have seen many friends lose children to depression in the last few years...it's like a whole generation is slowly fading away... hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2019 9:53:00 PM

Addiction and depression so sad. We long to live in the happiness. Nicely done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Kim...i have seen many children lose their lives to both....it always seems to be the kids that pretend to be the happiest... hugs

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/7/2019 9:46:00 PM

Stunning. To find beauty in such a horrific event is no small feat. Still the loss of a young life is a tragedy. I fear she was too fragile too beautiful for the ugly world surrounds some as delicate & precious as her. Excellent poetry. A Fav.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Maurice...i have seen many fall...it's a sad fact but this world is cruel and ugly .... hugs