Am I Pretty

Frolicking, under celestial kisses
younger ones unafraid
silent is life's eloquent, nuanced tableau
our nocturnal Eros

Am I pretty
or just a warm embrace?

Cleverly, he eluded all the eternal rules
Ojawe the spirit, sees all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Beaufort Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 5:44 AM
Hard to know what people are really thinking, but time reveals what ojawe already knows.
Nuwas Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 12:30 AM
Hello Duke, very true, Aysha
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Thank you :) :)
Bangalee Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 9:44 PM
poetic pretty expression; nice to read; congrats for the POD
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Thank you Mahtab :)
Flaherty Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Hello Aysha Personally pretty much like taste is subjective. In the eye of the beholder. But like poetry per day for example. You kindly most graciously took your time to read one of my poems And in return I have just read one of yours And my comment is this am I pretty Well your poem is pretty good
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:54 AM
It means so much to me that you enjoyed my poem and took the time to share your thoughts. Thank you for your wonderful comments
Messina Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Very nice, pretty lady. Congratulations, Aysha on POTD!
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:54 AM
you are most welcome Charles :)
Meadows Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 11:29 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:54 AM
Thank you Jeanette :)
Downing  Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Aysha :)
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:55 AM
Thank you, sorry I have been away, much appreciated.
Nicole Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:28 PM
I'm reminded that: Beauty comes from within, and shines on the outside. It's so wonderful knowing that, love is felt through a warm embrace. Congratulations Aysha, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:56 AM
Your encouraging comments on my poem warmed my heart. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me!
Feeley Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations Aysha on this POTD. Too many wonder if they are pretty...a prevalent but strange question.
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:56 AM
Yes for sure, thank you! :)
Anaya Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Alysha, you are a free spirit in Eros realm. Congratulations on your second POTD, since you've been here! "You're so pretty"...the God's watch and make us fall in love over again. ~xo Anaya
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:56 AM
:)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Congratulations on your POTD.
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:57 AM
Thank you Victor.
Leiser Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Excellent verse, Aysha! I see this made POTD! That’s quite an honor, congrats! :)
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:57 AM
Very kind, thank you!
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Impressive. You’re both pretty enjoying the love warm embrace. Congratulations on POTD
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful comments , I'm truly grateful for your appreciation!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:59 AM
thank you, I am so late I guess I should say to everyone Happy New Year! :) :)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you. Love, Gina
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 1:00 AM
a very belated thank you
Poet Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your POTD
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 1:00 AM
:) very kind of you
Baker Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Aysha! It was light and uplifting to read and I liked your questions, "Am I pretty or just a warm embrace?" I going to guess ... both! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 1:01 AM
Thank you Bill, I am so late to respond, I will say "Happy New Year"
May Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Congrats on POTD, Very nicely penned
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on the honor of POTD Aysha! :)
Empress Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved
Y. Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:51 AM
WoW! Aysha, You have penned such a well-written piece with much depth. Congratulations on getting the poem for the day. It was well-deserved. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:59 AM
Sorry for late thank you, but I really appreciate your kind words.
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 4:38 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Aysha. So much intrigue you spur in just a few words. So well written!
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 1:02 AM
:) :) :) Thank you
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Your poetry proves you are so much more than just a pretty face Aysha. May I offer my sincere congratulations on your POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:58 AM
I'd love to see more of your excellent work and hope you post a new piece soon Aysha, my muse is on vacation at the moment I hope she returns, oh and Happy New Year:-) hugs Jan xx
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:52 AM
I'm touched by your positive feedback on my poem. Thank you for your kind words; they inspire me to keep writing.
Kitchin Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Aysha, congratulations on POTD!
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:45 AM
Thank you and sorry for long delay to answer, it has been trying times.
Jones Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 3:02 AM
Congrats on a great potd!
Nuwas Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 12:50 AM
Thank you!!!!!!
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