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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/21/2015 9:22:00 AM

Huge one this lil poem for me contains a brush of sadness and deep longing.. :)! correct me if am wrong?..thanks warm hugs..!!~olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 4/21/2015 9:25:00 AM

It sure does little one, soon to be smiling though hugs//Dino James xxxx

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/19/2015 10:16:00 AM

Absolutely love this Mr Inverness ;) hope your weekend is awesome.. xx

James Fraser
Date: 4/19/2015 1:43:00 PM

Hiya Wilma, lovely to see you here. It's been a lovely weekend, and quick as usual. Have a lovely evening, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2015 4:51:00 PM

Lovely senryu James:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 4/18/2015 12:58:00 PM

Thank you kindly Jan, hugs//James xx