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Alyssa

I now bow down to her Within the knowledge you never read this But feel it in your center The secret well that softens your breathe away Astorm in your rising climate Your harsh and blazing all-woman bravado May you melt like butter in my heart Only feeling this poem As night-pulse love voodoo. As day-throb wonder dust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/14/2010 8:18:00 PM
Dear Matt, Exquisite " I now bow down to " YOU " Only feeling this poem " Every POETS Dream You are a very Clever POET I looked at the title of YOUR Contest "I LOVE YOU Because" Then I read what you wanted and not using the word 'LOVE" Express LOVE but I will never say the word " LOVE is Over USED " The Word-- maybe : but not the FEELING--- not the Movement of the Pen " The FEELINGS of True Love You are Very INSPIRING YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 1/8/2010 11:04:00 AM
Dark and passionate....must be some facinating person to inspire this write!
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Date: 1/8/2010 9:51:00 AM
This is a nice take on love! I really enjoyed it!
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