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Always Upbeat

Some days begin a-breezin' then tumble downhill This guy's always upbeat, refuse to promote ill will Not this old fancy pants Gonna stay and dance Till my clock's turns off and I feed the daffodils

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/28/2017 9:02:00 AM

You'd make a daffodil smile//But, please won't you wait a while?//Because us crazies//and those daisies//are busy groovin' on your style. PUSH 'EM DOWN JACKSON, PUSH 'EM DOWN (those daisies;-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2017 9:12:00 AM

Are you taking my advice??? Stay tuned! HOPE YOU HAVE A SUPER DOOPER POOPER OF A DAY!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/28/2017 7:35:00 AM

Dance on fancy pants! Love from the East!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2017 8:03:00 AM

"fancy pants"... that's me!!! Love it! xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/28/2017 7:33:00 AM

Oh, check out my Paperclip Limerick Jackson, you will get a giggle from it...no doubt you will!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2017 8:01:00 AM

Will do...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/28/2017 7:31:00 AM

How do you know you won't feed the roses, oh you had to rhyme! Hee Hee! I'm in a mood today! You have written a fabulous poem here this morning! What a delight it was to read! You have amazed me, yet again I'm not surprised at your glorious skill! What a tremendous limerick, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2017 8:01:00 AM

Don't think we have a choices... and as you said, must rhyme at all times!!!