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Always Be Good

Even if others always make us sad We should always behave nicely to all We should be good, we should never be bad Even if others always make us sad If good, for our goodness we will be glad Our conscience will not prick, we will stand tall Even if others always make us sad we should always behave nicely to all We should be good, we should never be bad Even if others always make us sad If good, for our goodness we will be glad Our conscience will not prick, we will stand stand tall We should always behave nicely to all We should never sin, we should never fall 15.06.2021 For Write A Trionet For Me contest by L. Milton Hankins Syllable count 10 per line checked at HMS

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Date: 6/21/2021 8:04:00 PM
Great advice. The world would be a much better place if we all lived like this.
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Date: 6/15/2021 7:04:00 AM
A nice round of musical delight with a moral grounding.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2021 9:15:00 AM
You did great! Third to last verse has an extra “stand”
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/15/2021 7:25:00 AM
This form is like that, so many repeating lines. Hope I did it correctly!

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