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beneath a sea, plates of dispute spawn waves,
born with the intent to leave the shoreline
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turbines of wind in pillage of fury, 
kill the helpless, but do not leave courage
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from brilliance of a firestorm's vengeance
don't be blinded by fear, hope must not be
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Form-- Dixdeux O 
for Deb's Contest: Wannabe Haikuettes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/13/2013 5:01:00 PM
Congrats, Connie!!!! A haikuette...how cool is that! The imagery your words produced were amazing...
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Date: 6/12/2013 9:25:00 PM
Carrie, your words paint three vivid scenes. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2013 3:53:00 PM
Lovely and Excellent write,Carrie......Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:48:00 AM
3 lovely and very different haiku's easy to see how you won and big congrats Shadow I love it/them
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Date: 6/11/2013 11:30:00 PM
A triple treat of an entry that deserved to win in the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/11/2013 8:33:00 PM
Congrats Carrie well done ....Seren
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Date: 6/11/2013 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, great job!
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Date: 6/11/2013 7:10:00 PM
Fantastic poem Carrie Congratulations SuZ
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Date: 6/11/2013 6:44:00 PM
Congrats on another stunner! BG
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Date: 6/11/2013 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie the is outstanding. A well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/11/2013 3:59:00 PM
Wow! Look at you take the ball and run, so many just described the picture, I did not know who wrote what and didn't check, most did not make form errors [that was nice!] I think you were very smart knowing me and my love of LONG to pick this form & to make a string as I said you could! This verse also stands alone with or without the art. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2013 1:34:00 PM
Marvelous work! Congratulations on your ABC love win! You deserve it!
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Date: 6/4/2013 12:49:00 PM
- As always quality work, Carrie! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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