Along the Shady Paths of Vivid Green

The cemetery was fresh and vivid green 
when we took our bikes down the paths of it -
past stones and trees and mausoleums and grass as far as we could see,
carefree on that muggy summer afternoon,
perspiration glistening on our arms and on our faces
as we sought to stay on the shady side of each well-traveled lane.

Instinctively we followed Dale, our older red-haired fun-loving brother,
turning here and there; it didn’t matter. We had no destination,
no gravesites of friends or relatives to visit. 
Sometimes we would spot an interesting tombstone,
jump off our bikes and take a closer look at it.
We were just kids, out of school for summer with no real obligations.
Our lives were a clean slate, not like the worn and broken headstones
we spotted sometimes on the cemetery’s edge, the older area’s grave stones
whose names were hard to read and dates went as far back as the 1800’s.
Those were emblems of an ancient past for us.
It was 1965! We were the modern generation and the future loomed
as large for us 
                        as those many squared city blocks the cemetery measured.

Flash forward two decades to 1984.  I was married with two small kids
and back in my hometown; things around me seeming so much smaller,
and the future loomed not quite so large ahead of me this time.
Most of my sisters were married but leading separate lives in different states.
We all had pressing obligations, so our reunion could not be a long one.
No longer were my sisters and I carefree, and we were not riding bikes.
We rode in cars that followed one another in a line; 
the cemetery was cold and dismal grey that December day
as we gathered around the unearthed sod,
staring, unbelieving, into the giant hole that was to be the final resting place
for the brother whom we’d once followed so gleefully
                                                   along the shady paths of vivid green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:19 AM
Dear Andrea, your sweet reminisce of youthful days pulled me into the past with you and held me captivated to the devastating end. So tragic! I'm so sorry for the loss of your beloved brother. Beautiful and poignant. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 1:30 PM
Thanks for your kind words
Toney Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 7:40 PM
Andrea, this is quietly devastating. The “fresh and vivid green of childhood” becomes the “cold and dismal grey” of loss. I mourn your loss. This is a Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your third place win on Mile 20 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 21 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 20 Checkpoint blog post.
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Thanks so much, Mark. My brother was killed by a drunk driver on his last year of law school. He would have been fabulous.
Godwin Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 11:19 PM
Wow, a top win and a fav - double hitter. Congratulations!
Godwin Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 11:14 PM
Oh my gosh, a tear gusher, for some reason I didn't cry but probably just because I've used up so much emotion lately. Off to the one vs. this. LOVE CayCay
Raha Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 12:25 PM
My god this is chilling Andrea.painfully unpredictable. I was reading gracefully and then the sudden Muhammad Ali punch that threw me off the chair.full accolades.
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 5:46 PM
So beautiful and so heartfelt congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place in my contest, oh my what an emotional write, that ending was staggering, so well done, Constance
Ficklin Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 10:01 AM
A beautiful write Andrea, Congrats :)
Grasso Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations Andrea. A winning write from beginning to end. ...Fran
Daniel Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 3:47 AM
A really touching write:) Congratulations on your fine win, Andrea:)
Misra Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Dear Andrea, a very beautiful poem, to say the least. Poignant because of the personal tragedy. There is plenty of contrast in your poem - days of fun, days of youth, the verdant cemetery a place of so much fun. And then age catches up, there is sombreness, bikes replaced by cars, progression of time, and the cemetery again. But OK, it was December and a day of mourning - spring will be around - there will be more bikes, and the cemetery will be fresh and vivid green again!
Misra Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:54 PM
(Couldn't complete because of character restrictions). Congratulations on your perfect placement right at the top! ~karam~
Raina Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your win ....such an emotional write with an unexpected ending.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Congratulations on your poignant write and first place win!
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 8:40 PM
So sad, Andrea, how your excellent narrative emotionally brings the happy and tragic together separated by two decades. Sorry for your loss...Congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 8:21 PM
A most deserving win Andrea, congratulations...
May Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:40 PM
A touching write Andrea....Congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely but sad tale. Love, joyce
Laurie Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Hello Andrea ... so touching - and brilliant - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Hicks Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Wow, so poignant, touching, and gosh ... MOVING! I think this is the best cemetery poem that I've read because of how real it felt ... the darkness was saved for last, making it stand out more. Exceptional narrative, Andrea. A FAVE!
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:19 PM
thanks so much , Timothy. I felt so happy to be inspired this way by BW's theme.
Devnath  Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:31 PM
A heart touching poem and after reading a nice heart will feel very sad surely and eyes will be soaked up with tears. Well done my lovely friend. God has blessed you a golden passionate heart. Good luck with a great 7. Loved always, bl
Vaso Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Made me cry! Last verse, I could picture in my mind, great write!
Walker Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Well, I'm crying now. Everything so elegantly written. Love the ending, along the shady paths of vivid green.
Grasso Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:51 AM
Simply beautiful composition. Feels like the poet is reciting while the readers listen. A pleasure. ...Fran
Puddifoot Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 4:52 AM
i like this poetic narrative from you, andrea, really good entry for the contest, i think constance will love it, so heart wrenching there at the end (hugs)...also thanks for my placement in your recent contest, these summer shorties have been fun and are good writing exercises - though i have to agree to disagree about the use of punctuation and capitalization in tanka! lol renowned poet philip gross wrote a lovely one called 'dragonfly tanka' and he capitalizes and punctuates it
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 4:50 AM
When someone is taken from us in their prime of youth unexpectedly the pain is that much more difficult. You never really get over it. A poignant piece that should do well Andrea. Blessings, Connie
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