Alone Inside

Low in the valley a voice grumbles
In a melancholic tone, baritone
Like a wounded beast moaning in the night
So lonely, makes one wonder about things

Higher still, the same melody repeats
Echoes through the trees and ruffles the leaves
Alto horn I should think, calmer like mist
I am loping with the beast in my mind

Then strings enter the scene, quietly first
Creeping up on us, like adrenal lush
Deep snorts breaking the air, our hooves trundle
Higher we wonder, and the piccolo 

The crescendo is near, as the dawn breaks
Things of wonder echo alone inside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Lovely and sad poem you written here David, I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Chircop Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:58 AM
I can feel so much solitude here..it touches the core.. So much depth on your verse-Charma
Delacroix Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 11:59 PM
I love it! Another musical write. Well written, David! I believe there is music in your soul. :)
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