Alone I Lay

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Written, April 11, 2024
For the contest, BiteSize No. 85
Sponsor, Line Gauthier

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In a green field quite alone I lay, the birds sing songs each his own; and squirrels and chipmunks play, and happy flowers are wind blown. I am serene in this place of peace, for nature has painted a masterpiece !

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/13/2024 4:32:00 AM

Delightful indeed, Constance:)

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:35:00 PM

Joanna, thank you for the compliment, hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/12/2024 4:48:00 PM

simply a delightful poem. I felt encouragement and peace with your descriptive words. I agree. Nature paints such beautiful masterpieces. Best wishes with the contest, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:36:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment lovely comment and encouragement, hugs

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/12/2024 1:07:00 PM

Beautiful, all need to come to know this peace and love flowing throughout, : )

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:36:00 PM

Stephan, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 4/12/2024 9:59:00 AM

I love this peaceful serenity.

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:37:00 PM

Jay, thank you for the compliment, hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/11/2024 6:58:00 PM

Dear Constance, a wonderful serene journey into nature's embrace. I loved your descriptions of the green field, singing birds, playful squirrels, and dancing flowers which paint a tranquil scene. It's shows a soulful peace and beauty that surrounds all of us, even in moments of solitude. - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:37:00 PM

Daniel, thank you for the compliment and nice comment, blessings and hugs