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Alone Amongst the Trees

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Winds whipping my soul Coldness wont let go White squalls blind my hopes What for do I exist at all Birch trees sway in the wind Dancing to skies grey and grim Pathways lead only to graves Alone I lie amongst the trees

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Date: 2/27/2018 5:48:00 AM
A question many ask in their lives my friend. Such a somber image your fine poetry present in this gem. A fav...
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Date: 2/12/2018 11:28:00 AM
A chilling lament done very well, Arthur!
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Date: 2/11/2018 3:53:00 PM
I love what this picture spoke to you. I feel it so clearly. Great write!!
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:30:00 AM
You gave me the chills Arthur! Your write is so descriptive it reminds me of how lonely i felt in the winters of my youth.
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Date: 2/11/2018 6:41:00 AM
such chilling imagery Arthur it made me feel quite sad:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:04:00 PM
existence for a reason..and yes it is a cold image of self
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Date: 2/7/2018 6:50:00 PM
i love this one Arthur, the first line got me hooked 100%, great stuff
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Date: 2/7/2018 11:31:00 AM
Get down from there, you might fall
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Date: 2/7/2018 10:34:00 AM
Well written Arthur. This really reaches the reader :)
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Date: 2/7/2018 8:32:00 AM
Chilling. I want to get a blanket for you Art.
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Date: 2/7/2018 1:19:00 AM
Great write.....Seren
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Date: 2/7/2018 12:16:00 AM
Very moving poetry, Great Bear
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