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Poetic Form: Tetractys

Inspired: 2023 November 12

*3rd Place*
Tetractys
Contest Judged: 2023 November 18
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

Image: N/A

Tryst befriends a hodgepodge of too much pangs leading to unsuspected circumstance despite light at the end of the tunnel count on lights out as miss match no friend twist

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:47:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest,William :) - hugs

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/20/2023 7:12:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. 'Twas a fun write for me, my friend. Aloha, William

Paige Hind

Date: 11/18/2023 9:43:00 PM

Your writing of this form is brilliant. Enjoyed!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/18/2023 9:58:00 PM

I found this to be a delightful write, indeed, Paige. Aloha, William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/18/2023 8:04:00 AM

I love your twist in this write my dear friend. I see congratulations are in order! Wonderful William! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/18/2023 11:10:00 AM

I am indeed grateful, Linda. You are a sight for either sore or well eyes alike to conceptionalize, my friend. Aloha, William

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 5:28:00 AM

A very intriguing and heartfelt write. You weave your thoughts and feelings seamlessly with brilliant diction. I love the ending the most dear poet. Always a pleasure reading your work. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/18/2023 5:53:00 AM

I am quite pleased to have participated, Ink Empress. I am grateful and honored, my friend. Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 11/13/2023 1:39:00 PM

An excellent selection of words from your vast vocabulary.. I Think the sponsor will like this one..

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2023 3:05:00 PM

A treat indeed, Silent One. Adrift was I to reply; the axiom be a given, yet 'hodgepodge' somewhat be the odd man out, as it seldoms me. I respect your valued time and your impeccable use of it--now that's a word that seldoms other posters, my friend. Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2023 10:44:00 AM

well done here, and quite a topic you chose.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2023 11:41:00 AM

Wispy quill natured a bombshell--5 minutes whoosh. Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2023 10:10:00 AM

What a creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. Good Luck... Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2023 11:46:00 AM

Mahalo, Paula, and I'm happy for you. I shall for a day, and a will for the week, ie., if you enjoy the wonder too. Aloha, William

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/13/2023 7:17:00 AM

She did not requite his love it seems all too sad. Time heals as they say. A perfect Tetractys, I like the shape outcome! x Aloha-Anaya

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2023 11:51:00 AM

Yes, Anaya, then was the days when fishes were plentiful, yet in the passing years, they'd be only whales. Mahalo as always, my friend. Aloha, William