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Allure, Yours

Your body all over mine.
          Sinful, how it titillates me! 

          A billowing smoke, drifting 
            to an untold destination; 
            your silhouette dancing
             against the fading light
                   of my dreams.

       You taste sweeter than nectar 
  on my tongue. The mischievous smile
             on your face, beguiling.
             Your come-hither stare,
         so passionate and seductive.
     
       It brings me down to my knees
           like an army surrendered.

     That charm...that charm of yours
       is like an intoxicating fragrance
          That wink...that flirty wink
      the intriguing intimation it bares!
             Oh, how you tease me!

             The heaven in your sighs
                     tranquilizes me 
                     like a sedative.
              The magic in your touch;
               such fever it engenders! 

                 You haunt my reverie
             with your irresistible allure.



Date written: 06/26/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Alex Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 8:21 PM
" The heaven in your sighs tranquilizes me like a sedative" - Great poesy. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 5:44 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
George   Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 8:22 AM
So sensual!! Many congrats on your top-notch win, Edward.~ Elaine
Ibeh Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine:-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 2:04 PM
Wonderful free verse from you, Edward. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Ibeh Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Ashley Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Edward, the sensual romance of your poem intoxicates my heart's imagination. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
Ibeh Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much, Susan:-) Your feedback means a lot to me!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. I missed this the first time. I wish I had a pen like you have. It writes beautifully. Enjoy your win and day writing away...................
Ibeh Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:38 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-) I really appreciate it!
Watt Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Edward, your depiction of that sensual allure between two lovers is captivating. You have captured so well thos intoxicating, otherworldly sensations. Well done, and congrats for your win, my friend ~ John
Ibeh Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback and congrats, John:-) Most appreciated.
Mishra Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 2:30 PM
You have a brilliant way with romance and gorgeous imagery my friend. This is another one of your beautiful poems. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings!
Ibeh Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Thank you so much for the congrats and the kind comments, Aditi:-) They mean a lot to me. Blessings, my dear friend! *Hug*
One Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:11 PM
An alluring and sensual poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:17 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, SO:-) What an incredible honor!
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