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Alleviating Hunger

When feeding a family of four From a 16-inch terrarium The secret is to eat less, not more Or build a seafood aquarium

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/29/2011 1:06:00 PM
Well Carolyn this is a new form to me...nice write here...
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Date: 2/15/2011 7:37:00 PM
Clever little write with great descriptiveness and rhyming. I see this won for you in a contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:52:00 AM
nice poem with a good suggestion. When i read this poem i remember most people in Africa who are suffering from poverty
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Date: 7/14/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The Grook". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2010 5:45:00 AM
Incredibly clever Carolyn, Congradulations on your win!!! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 7/14/2010 5:45:00 AM
Incredibly clever Carolyn, Congradulations on your win!!! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 7/14/2010 5:45:00 AM
Incredibly clever Carolyn, Congradulations on your win!!! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 7/13/2010 11:28:00 PM
I know you are clever..you just keep rolling along. Congrats LNC> BG Hey, Happy Birthday..
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:51:00 PM
I really like this one Carolyn. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Harry
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:30:00 PM
A nice and witty presentation My friend. Congrations, Agape, Moses.
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:09:00 PM
Congrats on your no. 4 tie in my Grook contest.
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Date: 7/10/2010 4:58:00 PM
Cute and funny~Enjoyed you write special one!!!!A hempen halter is A NOOSE FOR HANGING~Ouch!~A blessed day be with you~Rick
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Date: 7/10/2010 9:40:00 AM
this is quite unique, Carolyn! Grooks are sure different, aren't they? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/10/2010 9:00:00 AM
Now that is funny! Carolyn, I'll bet it's a winner! It is as funny as a limerick. Good luck in the contest with this one. Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:40:00 PM
Hi Carolyn--I am still trying to wrap my brain around this grook-- trying to do a bit of research and reading grooks like yours does seem to help me grasp it more-- interesting write you have here, very clever, eating less-- hopefully I can come up with something for this contest... nikko :)
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Date: 7/9/2010 3:14:00 PM
Golly, I have never heard of Grook, it sounds like a yuchers word. Good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 7/9/2010 3:14:00 PM
Good luck, great write as always Carolyn...Luv Michael... PS. my writes are not always based on a current time in my life , but thanks for your concern and thoughts...
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:23:00 PM
I had a different rhyming version of my Grook. And as I've viewed most eveyone has too. I may go back and change mine. This one is quite cool. Good luck. Agape, Moses
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