'all the Little Pieces'

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my life is FULL of fragments like pieces of a p u z z l e and I am not sure I want to find each one so I p u s h them away all those fragments drifting afraid at what I will discover WITHIN a thought oh go away GO away p a i n f u l memory . . . best to LIVE in a magical place of green forests and b e a u t y I like to wander the tangled paths all alone and g a t h e r wildflowers all the little pieces drifting afraid to shine a light on the TRUTH of my life oh go away GO away p a i n f u l memory . . . _________________________________ September 7, 2016 Edit March 26, 2021 Poetry/Verse/"all the little pieces" Copyright Protected, ID 03-1342-872-26 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, All Yours (Mar 28) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/28/21

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/26/2021 9:23:00 AM

This is a beautiful piece of work, Constance. I enjoyed reading it so much, and I particularly like the way it is laid out and flows down the page. Good stuff!

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2021 9:26:00 AM

Milt, thank you for the compliment on my poem, appreciate a lot _Constance

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 3/26/2021 9:16:00 AM

beautiful and sad. good luck with your competition. x

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2021 9:27:00 AM

Lady Labyrinth, thank you so much for the compliment, grateful _Constance