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All That Remains

All that remains… Silence rests on dust and gloom, Upon her head rests the old heirloom… As I grasp the hat in shaking hands, I gaze upon the picture, Framed upon the stand… Her smile as bright as, The gleam in her eyes… Her head tilted back, Looking from under where the large brim lies… The photo is cracked, It is wrinkled with age… I remember that chapter in our life… It was written on, The very first page… Her T-shirt thin, Leaving breast to bear… Her jeans were faded; Ripped here and there… She loved nothing more, Than the common place; Never could do with ruffles and lace… But the hat was sacred, Somehow it fit right in… It served to shadow her features; To hide her mischievous grins… Now those times are gone; My lady at rest… All that remains are: A picture, Some jeans, A shirt, And The Hat in this chest…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/13/2010 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations onyour featured peom this week. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. This is Beautiful. Such deep emotion and sweet without being sticky. Loved it.
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Evets. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:54:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:11:00 PM
Good use of imagery for share your memory. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/7/2010 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations Evets, on your feature this week. It made me tear up a little. I have an "Old Hat Collection" some were my grandmothers. Sentimental Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/2/2009 9:03:00 AM
Sad and touching. Those memories are special. Vince
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Date: 1/30/2009 7:16:00 PM
She was so special to you..this poem is just beautiful. Isnt it amazing how a tnagible thing can produce such memories. ? BG
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Date: 1/30/2009 1:47:00 PM
This is so beautiful, so sad. The memory of this lady that you have painted is clear and lovely, what a special tribute, so lovingly written. Blessings... Amy :)
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