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All That Passion Suddenly Erased

Winds were among first to notice Fragrant air blowing fresh breeze Stemming from your pristine vicinity Extolling prospects of your visit, Announced by the birds in flight Message circulated far and wide Into the emerging scenic twilight Pushing far away the opaque skies, Cotton clouds then adorned charm Scattered in ways of scenic art form In orange hues peeking from blue Amid aerial vistas painted for you, Sprinkling rays on mosaic colors Layers of fabric spun florid display Anxious for you to take your step Into this arena of majestic stage, But all that passion suddenly erased Prompting egress of darker motifs When sun plunged below horizon, Dismayed that you never showed up. April 12, 2018 Placed first in contest 515 by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 7/24/2022 6:16:00 AM

After such eager anticipation , the sudden plunge into disappointment is truly unbearable ! The wonderful images used are exhilarating ! You alone can craft such a poem of passion in a language so picturesque....and most poignant!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/12/2018 4:15:00 PM

Hi Vijay, dropping by with my congratulations on your win with this excellent write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 7:22:00 PM

Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your top win.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/10/2018 8:03:00 PM

Your thoughts have wings. I feel as though I could caress your words and fly. (I would, if that were possible) Even though love, beauty and magical moments linger- a touch of sadness tugs deeply at the heart, while reading this. Very emotional indeed. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Oliver Furlong

Date: 5/7/2018 4:06:00 PM

A wonderfully well-captured atmosphere of disappointment. Very well crafted Vijay, very nice!

John Hamilton

Date: 5/6/2018 9:13:00 AM

Great write Vijay, loved your use of unique word combinations, "prompting egress of darker motifs" wonderful writing!!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/5/2018 9:35:00 AM

It is so disappointing when we look forward to the experience of a great love and it's not reciprocated! Then a day full of sunshine turns to storm clouds! What a very insightful, awesome piece this is, my friend! Excellent write as usual! Best regards. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/25/2018 8:15:00 PM

Hello Vijay, as I was reading this poem, i felt like i was part of it. have a nice evening my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2018 4:28:00 PM

Thank you Darlene.

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/14/2018 8:12:00 PM

Yeah I definitely like this a lot! Going into my faves... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2018 8:00:00 AM

Happy to read your kind words..many thanks Akkina.

James Swartz

Date: 4/14/2018 4:05:00 PM

Wow Vijay! I'm making this a fave of mine. You put your soul into this and it is strong and brilliant.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2018 4:35:00 PM

Many thanks James..always appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/14/2018 7:18:00 AM

Epic piece here Vjay, glad I stopped by!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2018 11:17:00 AM

Thank you Kyle.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2018 5:25:00 PM

what a lovely poem of personfication, Vijay. Very well done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2018 6:08:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...appreciate your supportive comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2018 1:48:00 PM

- Make me feel sad ... but beautifully written, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2018 3:51:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise..this is not for contest.

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/13/2018 9:30:00 AM

May the candles of hope keep kindling ... the crimson canvas will sure turn up ... especially in the wake of this beautiful poem ... well crafted with the words in multichrome ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2018 10:01:00 AM

Many thanks Probir--appreciate your kind words.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/13/2018 8:39:00 AM

I'm impressed with the smooth progression from beauty to disappointment--the way you connected them, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2018 10:00:00 AM

Thank you Janice..always happy to read your thoughtful comments.

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/13/2018 5:10:00 AM

Well done my passionate friend...pitty how sometimes love can go up in a puff of smoke...stay in the light^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2018 8:25:00 AM

So true--appreciate your visit and kind words, WW.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/13/2018 2:26:00 AM

Nice setting...and a glorious ending...not as planned...but what can you do...Like a lovely painting...All the best Vijay...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2018 8:25:00 AM

Many thanks Arturo..appreciate your kind words.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/12/2018 5:16:00 PM

Beautifully expressed dark romantic poetry, Vijay. I LOVE the dark somber tone of this poem. Great lines throughout ... But all that passion suddenly erased. Prompting egress of darker motifs. When sun plunged below horizon, dismayed that you never showed up. Marvelous poem. Love and smiles.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Freddie--appreciate the kind feedback.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2018 4:16:00 PM

You have painted the beauty of Anticipation with captivating imagery, Vijay. What a pity to be let down...the last stanza is heartbreaking. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2018 8:23:00 AM

Thank you Paul--appreciate the kind feedback.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/12/2018 3:07:00 PM

isn't it painful to be stood up or abandoned? vijay, this is a biting, wonderful melody.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2018 3:20:00 PM

Thank you nette--appreciate your feedback.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/12/2018 9:57:00 AM

Very well done, Vijay! Such glory in the expecting, only to be let down! The despair in the end. The plunging sun...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2018 10:07:00 AM

Appreciate your feedback Kim..many thanks for your visit and kind words.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/12/2018 8:32:00 AM

I can truly relate to your story, Vijay as the sun has plunged for me to at times, So well expressed and beautiful !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2018 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Mike--appreciate reading your kind words..thank you again for your supportive comments.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2018 8:27:00 AM

This is so sad but written to beautifully.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Richard.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/12/2018 7:27:00 AM

Anticipation, yearning, awaiting, disapointment , devastation! What a magnificent display of feelings expressed so vividly in a heavenly language dear friend, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2018 10:04:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your supportive comments..many thanks my friend, Demetrios.