All of Me

A beautiful thing just happened I asked him to play All of Me by Buckcherry on guitar The words were on screen and I sang and he held my attention and I held his And I disappeared into the beauty of the song and the moment Then one daughter said "we need to soundproof this house!" and the other told us it was rubbish and could I plait her hair. Singing Deleted Words has changed something in me, I have more to give I feel.

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Paul Willason

Date: 7/17/2023 6:26:00 AM

An exquisite moment in time caught in your web of words with the lovely, touching intervention of your children, topped with the cherry of self realisation. Good one DD...had a few helpings of this poem...

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/17/2023 6:46:00 AM

You're spoiling me with this praise Paul haha - there's an element of you've had to be along for the ride to enjoy this one on my journey of poems. Thank you, I always delight to see a comment from yourself :)