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All My Hurts

I’d like to gather all my hurts And roll them up like clay, But you’d be wrong if you assume I’d throw them all away. I’d sculpt a statue tall and fierce And paint it garish hues, Reflecting all the colors that In life I’d never choose. Then I would cart it to a spot With nothing else around And with one match, set it ablaze And burn it to the ground. Then, once my hurts were in a heap Of ashes, I’d feel free To focus on the things I need To be a lighter me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/30/2017 10:22:00 AM
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. Let go, let God, in him we trust. The artist molds their inner soul. If you squeeze to tight you just get coal.
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Date: 7/19/2017 9:53:00 AM
I think I wake up with a new pain everyday. Mrs Ilene. I really like this one. I'd be like Maurice. Mine would be a barn fire!
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Date: 7/19/2017 9:10:00 AM
Think I'll copy this and post it on the refrigerator — the unneeded calories residing therein might be defeated if I had this to remind me "to focus on the things I need," instead of the rumbling internal baggage which subtly encourages consumption of cholesterol and cookies. To my faves for sure! Cheerskies! ~j
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Date: 7/19/2017 8:23:00 AM
I think we'd all like to take your advice, I'd have a barnfire, sadly. Wonderful flow and rhymes. Thanks for stopping by. / M
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Date: 7/19/2017 5:26:00 AM
I think we'd better all keep a good supply of matches around. I find your writes so refreshing, Ilene.
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Date: 7/18/2017 8:27:00 PM
Ilene lets do that together. I would like to get rid om.f my hurt to. Good poe
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/30/2017 10:18:00 AM
I like good Poe. :) Is that what they call a Freudian slip.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2017 8:28:00 PM
Good poem.

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