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All I Want For Christmas Is My Heart Back

Last Christmas I gave you my heart This year I'm gonna take it back We're told to keep two metres apart And caught you and her in the sack. * * * 17th December 2020 Christmas Chastushka - Rules Revised Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2020 3:49:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win , this was one of my absolute faves!:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/27/2020 4:02:00 PM

Thank you so much for that Jan :-) hugs Belle xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2020 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Belle. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/27/2020 12:18:00 PM

Thank you very much Eve. Happy New Year to you too. Hugs Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2020 5:34:00 PM

Good one, Belle. You could do a novelty Xmas song on this theme!! Congrats in my contest, and Merry Christmas to you.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/24/2020 5:46:00 PM

A novelty song would be good Andrea, have to give it some thought. Thank you for my placement in your contest, I am delighted, a lovely gift for Christmas. Merry Christmas to you too... Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/18/2020 10:36:00 AM

Thank you for the first laugh this morning! Aloha! Rico

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/18/2020 3:41:00 PM

That’s great that this gave you first laugh of the day, hope you got many more... Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2020 2:06:00 AM

Lol, I hope they were wearing masks, if nothing else. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/18/2020 9:13:00 AM

Ha, I hope so too, they say wearing a mask is an act of love... Thank you Tom, Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2020 2:00:00 AM

- Today's best ... :))) ... so funny, Belle :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/18/2020 7:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I appreciate that and the best wishes. Hugs ~ Belle :-)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/17/2020 10:27:00 PM

Hot humor, Belle. Loved the poem not the cheating though. ~~

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/18/2020 7:21:00 AM

Hi Victor, it’s only a fictional misdemeanour, no crime in the rhyme. Thank you... Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/17/2020 5:51:00 PM

This is just extraordinary humor, Belle. Not a wasted syllable. A real corker! Superb contest entry. Season's best, Gershon

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/17/2020 6:04:00 PM

Ah, thank you, so very grateful for that Gershon. The season's best to you too... Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2020 4:49:00 PM

ha ha ha love it this is very clever!:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/17/2020 4:56:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I read your brilliant entry into the contest and thought I’d give it a go... Thank you, hugs Belle xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/17/2020 4:34:00 PM

Lol! Belle, This is a good one for the contest . It’s good she took her back, he needs a big “ Whack” up side the head. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/17/2020 4:54:00 PM

Oh Alexis you just gave me a laugh, A whack upside the the head is exactly what the rascal needs to get. What a hoot we have in the soup. thank you... Belle :-)