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All I Want

Spending more and more time with you I keep hoping my wish will come true A wish of us being together Maybe awhile or even forever You told me once my life helps you deal with yours Maybe one day this life can be ours All I want to do is be with you by your side Taking everyday together with stride You’re an amazing person who I want to be with Sometimes you seem very cold and stiff When I’m with you time seems to go so slow As slow as a turtle can go And when were apart all I do is sit and think about you Because I am so very very blue Without you by my side I feel empty and incomplete I keep hoping one day our souls will meet We are together all the time and I no in my heart That eventually we will never be apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/13/2009 3:12:00 PM
Good job, Melissa! Welcome to PS! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/12/2009 12:47:00 PM
Nice emotional poem, you can find out types of poems uptop under "Forms of poetry", it is fun to try new types, this could be a Free Verse. A title alot of times comes straight out of the poem, this one could be..".A wish" or "All I want", see what I mean? Good work, keep on writting. Judy Riley
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