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All Eyes On the Stud

Bliss, wishful, a banter - wanting for love. One of his eyes shut. Winks with desperation. His heart’s pounding out seconds. The blonde rolls her head, her hair falls. His knees nearly collapse as he’s charmed. Stud composes himself. He struts forward. Bombshell draws him into her web - beguiles. Dull girls and boys, drivel, as they watch, living out their fantasy life through athlete and the beauty. Girls sighing. Boys cheering. If the popular can’t make a go, how will they? Here comes bliss.

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/12/2023 1:42:00 PM

Kim, a big CONGRATS on your win with this creative piece. Janice

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations dear Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Linda!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/11/2023 1:03:00 PM

always unique poetry from you, and this etheree is no exception (love the shape!) congrats on your contest win :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2023 2:40:00 PM

I so appreciate your comment! Thank you, Charlotte!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/11/2023 11:31:00 AM

Kim, hearty congratulations on your well deserved win with this lovely poem. Blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2023 2:41:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Lasaad!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 11:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2023 2:41:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 9:56:00 AM

Its amazing how one can do storytelling through a form such as etheree. I love a beautifully shaped double etheree always and the imagery here and flow of your words truly left me in awe! The ending is sheer bliss! Loving this! Thank you for writing and congratulations on winning!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2023 10:31:00 AM

Thank you! <3

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/2/2023 11:59:00 AM

So nicely composed and enjoyable, Kim. Best of wishes for the contest. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2023 12:07:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/2/2023 10:18:00 AM

Well expressed. Everyone has their insecurities.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2023 12:07:00 PM

Surely! Thank you!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/2/2023 8:41:00 AM

WoW! Kim, You penned a well-written Etheree for the contest. I'm for two meeting and falling in love. The beauty, the stud, the nerds, the ugly ducklings( you know their story), and everyone else in between! I liked how you ended this. Best wishes in the contest. Great job. Have a fantastic day;-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2023 12:08:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis! Great comment too :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2023 8:11:00 AM

Brilliant Etheree. Studs may pose as great but it is their character that counts. I had such an experience once. Fell in love with exuberance. later I learned the true meaning of love. Hugs xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2023 8:18:00 AM

Yes, I agree! High school antics. Glad you found true love!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/2/2023 7:47:00 AM

What a charming Etheree, Kim! Both the content, and the shape are fabulous!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2023 8:18:00 AM

Thank you, Mala!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2023 7:04:00 AM

Well, the bombshell and stub probably will be less likely to make a go or will they? Anyway, my vote is on the ordinary people making a go of it. Very nicely done. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2023 8:19:00 AM

Will they or won’t they…who will be the truly blissful in the end? Thank you, dear Sara!