Skat A Poet Acrostic

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Alien Feet

ALIEN                             -NOT-                               HUMAN


 Alien life form---                                             ---Far from human toucH
 Living among it self---                              ---In the heavens like a gurU
 Intelligence kept from civilization---      ---Scientist call it a phantoM 
 Earth remains alone---                                           ---Like a secret ninjA 
 NASA's top secret---                                           ---You are not humanN

 BY:                             .                                 BY:

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Benjamin Bartley June 30, 2024 at 10:12 AM Nice acrostic poem. You left the "BY:" blank on each side? What am I missing? Please explain if you wish. Or is it the mystery? Hm, well written, nonetheless.

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 17, 2016 at 7:02 PM A creative cherry bomb, Skat. It blew my mind for sure. Excellent write. Just another of your long line of admirers, try not step on our toes please. Heh heh heh. Love you dear. Keep loving and living, sharing and giving. Much love to you though.

Beverly Read August 14, 2016 at 1:03 AM Interesting formate. I read it both ways - across and then down each one. Don't know if I could write something like this and make it make sense. It seems very complicated.

Vladislav Raven February 17, 2016 at 8:07 PM Hi Skat, once again you let your mind traVEL ALONG ITS OWN way and you come out with something special and unique in its way. I would definitely be in the Alien box. Now the question is did you do them both or was there a little Linda on the sidelines. If there was it is even more unique. Really like the way this one has been set up. Anyway my friend excellent work. It has to be a seven from me....Vlad.

A Yorkshire Poet January 7, 2016 at 4:09 PM Outstanding, I love the letter play. Cheers.

Keith Bickerstaffe January 4, 2016 at 4:50 PM Very cleverly done! esp '...intelligence kept from civilization!' Just how much is kept from us! BRAVO Skat! Best wishes, Keith

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 3:49 PM Clever and creative 'alien feet' feat:) ET is watching, and maybe reading this! ~ Warm regards // paul

James Inman October 22, 2015 at 10:40 AM Very creative SKAT. Was it PD you colabed with here? Enjoyed.

Susan Clark June 2, 2015 at 3:47 PM SKAT - what a great piece of writing - sometimes I feel like what you have said and I couldn't help but giggle - and say to myself ' that explains a lot about my own strange self at times!" Thanks for this great write!

Cynthia Buhain-Baello May 23, 2015 at 4:04 AM Very creative and intriguing write, NASA? Really. Great piece!

David Waldrop March 15, 2015 at 8:16 PM Very interesting write. I enjoyed it enjoyed it a lot

Jimi Peranteau March 14, 2015 at 9:52 PM Love the capitalization on the ends!

Robert Denton July 8, 2014 at 8:49 AM Ho! I love this... really well done.

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 1, 2014 at 4:11 PM Irma, u got me here, Imma sucker for anything double, double dutch, double entendres, double dactyls, double ACORSICS, twins!!! u get it? anywho, this ones tight!

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2014 at 11:45 PM This remains one of my faves. THe way you did this with PD!!!

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2014 at 8:44 PM i'm sure I must have seen this at one point, but I am sure liking it right now!!! good one, you guys.

Archana Garg April 9, 2014 at 9:21 AM Great work. Your hard work is visible in this poem... Love this. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Jo-El Gerber March 15, 2014 at 4:38 AM This acrostic is fantastic. Great job my friend, I never seen an acrostic with two sides and beginning and end on separators. Very unique I must say. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more from you. -Jöel

Don Johnson March 5, 2014 at 10:21 PM area 51 comes to mind, or a more of secret time, the big eyed one forgot, he came to earth 4 what, it just slipped his mind, or not....love it babe....

Jared Pickett March 3, 2014 at 7:10 AM I have been waiting to comment on this beauty since you posted it!! It is too bad this will not get the credit it deserves..:-( This is EXACTLY what I am looking for in my contest. Those of you that have yet to enter my contest this is a GREAT example!! Well done ladies, I have enjoyed this very much, absolutely a favorite!!Asavvy1

Robert Johnson February 27, 2014 at 5:14 PM This is such an intrigueing poem. So creative and has a sort of alien perspective to it. Love it. GREAT collaboration Gals. :) Peace. :)

Heather Secrest February 22, 2014 at 6:35 AM Wow! This one is amazing!! I hadn't really thought about how we (humans) be aliens also. It is a creative form, I'm impressed. Great write!!

Michael Alexander February 15, 2014 at 10:41 PM just wow! I appreciate the comment and the welcome into the soup community. I hope to become a better poet and writer myself and learn from everyone else here. I love this poem by the way! Very creative and just, again, wow.

Tina Cole February 1, 2014 at 11:01 AM This is definitely different and interesting too. But at the risk of sounding naïve I don't fully understand it. Could you enlighten me? By the way thanks for welcoming me to poetry soup.

Robert Pettit January 28, 2014 at 8:32 PM A double acrostic! I haven't seen one on this site since I submitted "Happy New Year". Very clever.

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