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ALIEN                             -NOT-                               HUMAN

 Alien life form---                                             ---Far from human toucH
 Living among it self---                              ---In the heavens like a gurU
 Intelligence kept from civilization---      ---Scientist call it a phantoM 
 Earth remains alone---                                           ---Like a secret ninjA 
 NASA's top secret---                                           ---You are not humanN

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 10/17/2016 7:02:00 PM
A creative cherry bomb, Skat. It blew my mind for sure. Excellent write. Just another of your long line of admirers, try not step on our toes please. Heh heh heh. Love you dear. Keep loving and living, sharing and giving. Much love to you though.
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Date: 8/14/2016 1:03:00 AM
Interesting formate. I read it both ways - across and then down each one. Don't know if I could write something like this and make it make sense. It seems very complicated.
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:07:00 PM
Hi Skat, once again you let your mind traVEL ALONG ITS OWN way and you come out with something special and unique in its way. I would definitely be in the Alien box. Now the question is did you do them both or was there a little Linda on the sidelines. If there was it is even more unique. Really like the way this one has been set up. Anyway my friend excellent work. It has to be a seven from me....Vlad.
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:09:00 PM
Outstanding, I love the letter play. Cheers.
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Date: 1/4/2016 4:50:00 PM
Very cleverly done! esp '...intelligence kept from civilization!' Just how much is kept from us! BRAVO Skat! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/21/2015 3:49:00 PM
Clever and creative 'alien feet' feat:) ET is watching, and maybe reading this! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 10/22/2015 10:40:00 AM
Very creative SKAT. Was it PD you colabed with here? Enjoyed.
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Date: 6/2/2015 3:47:00 PM
SKAT - what a great piece of writing - sometimes I feel like what you have said and I couldn't help but giggle - and say to myself ' that explains a lot about my own strange self at times!" Thanks for this great write!
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Date: 5/23/2015 4:04:00 AM
Very creative and intriguing write, NASA? Really. Great piece!
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Date: 3/15/2015 8:16:00 PM
Very interesting write. I enjoyed it enjoyed it a lot
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Date: 3/15/2015 12:13:00 AM
Thank you SKAT A for welcoming me to Poetry Soup and I love your acrostic poem!
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Date: 3/14/2015 9:52:00 PM
Love the capitalization on the ends!
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Date: 7/8/2014 8:49:00 AM
Ho! I love this... really well done.
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Date: 7/1/2014 4:11:00 PM
Irma, u got me here, Imma sucker for anything double, double dutch, double entendres, double dactyls, double ACORSICS, twins!!! u get it? anywho, this ones tight!
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Date: 6/20/2014 11:45:00 PM
This remains one of my faves. THe way you did this with PD!!!
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Date: 4/16/2014 8:44:00 PM
i'm sure I must have seen this at one point, but I am sure liking it right now!!! good one, you guys.
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:21:00 AM
Great work. Your hard work is visible in this poem... Love this. Thanks for your visit to my page.
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Date: 3/15/2014 4:38:00 AM
This acrostic is fantastic. Great job my friend, I never seen an acrostic with two sides and beginning and end on separators. Very unique I must say. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more from you. -Jöel
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Date: 3/5/2014 10:21:00 PM
area 51 comes to mind, or a more of secret time, the big eyed one forgot, he came to earth 4 what, it just slipped his mind, or it babe....
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Date: 3/3/2014 7:10:00 AM
I have been waiting to comment on this beauty since you posted it!! It is too bad this will not get the credit it deserves..:-( This is EXACTLY what I am looking for in my contest. Those of you that have yet to enter my contest this is a GREAT example!! Well done ladies, I have enjoyed this very much, absolutely a favorite!!Asavvy1
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Date: 2/27/2014 5:14:00 PM
This is such an intrigueing poem. So creative and has a sort of alien perspective to it. Love it. GREAT collaboration Gals. :) Peace. :)
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Date: 2/22/2014 6:35:00 AM
Wow! This one is amazing!! I hadn't really thought about how we (humans) be aliens also. It is a creative form, I'm impressed. Great write!!
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Date: 2/15/2014 10:41:00 PM
just wow! I appreciate the comment and the welcome into the soup community. I hope to become a better poet and writer myself and learn from everyone else here. I love this poem by the way! Very creative and just, again, wow.
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:00:00 PM
creative and interesting. thanks for the comments back in november!
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Date: 2/1/2014 11:01:00 AM
This is definitely different and interesting too. But at the risk of sounding naïve I don't fully understand it. Could you enlighten me? By the way thanks for welcoming me to poetry soup.
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