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Alcohol

I hate the taste of alcohol a squalid little drink that twists the thoughts inside of you and changes what you think It takes away whats good in life destroy's the growth of love replacing it with bitterness it covers love in mud its bitter innuendoes it's thoughts provoking fears With anger in the fights you share your violence and your rage the wholes within your budget build room for lovers graves the cost of loving beer my friend is subtle deep and strong attacking home and family to me my friend that's wrong You blame your wife, your husband your son, the friends you share destroying life around you with each and every year yet still you keep on drinking your liquid cruelty clear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/21/2010 7:43:00 AM
bernard, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/19/2010 2:11:00 PM
Congrats on being featured. Your poem is fantastic and it is clear you believe in what you are writing. :)
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Bernard. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 6:17:00 PM
...I can feel the angry in your words. A+
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations Bernard, on your worthy presentations being featured this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:45:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Bernard. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 8:29:00 PM
TRUE STORY . That is the power of alcohol. I do well with out drinking .So I really do not hang out with many beer drinkers...loved this poem...
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