Alchemy

My tears into Your bottle- elixir of life, a panecea beyond price Inspired by Psalm 56:8

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Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/5/2009 2:39:00 PM

Love this!! Well done my friend. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2009 6:25:00 PM

You say so much in just a few words, Brian. Wish I could emulate this type of writing. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/18/2009 7:19:00 PM

This is priceless..you are the best. Hope your not cying tears into a bottle. if so..fill it with hope. BG

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/18/2009 7:14:00 PM

Wow, nice work Brian. I like the simplicity...Raul

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/18/2009 2:44:00 PM

Absolutely amazing and great work.

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 4/18/2009 2:32:00 PM

this is absolutely beautiful!....hope u r doin well...love n smiles Maryam*

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/18/2009 1:24:00 PM

so nicw,so beautiful-charma

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/18/2009 7:49:00 AM

Very beautiful Brian. Hope all is well. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/18/2009 5:48:00 AM

Brilliant piece Brian.. so strong and so many message in this piece.. tears into your bottle..Wow!