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Aladdin Without Paddin'

There once was a boy named Aladdin Who played hockey without any paddin' He forgot to duck And got struck by the puck Now a cast is what Aladdin's clad in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/16/2018 2:24:00 PM
I should think so; those pucks are hard and when traveling fast...ouch! Cute limerick.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/16/2018 9:38:00 PM
Yes, indeed: A puck run amok...
Date: 10/12/2018 4:19:00 PM
His cast/he's probably not 'glad in'! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/14/2018 12:13:00 PM
You got that right! Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 10/11/2018 7:23:00 AM
chuckling all over, gershon... much enjoyed!..huggs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/12/2018 2:27:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one, nette. Thank you for your encouragement! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/10/2018 11:53:00 PM
Mr. Aladdin, maid chamber of hospital invites you//// nice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/12/2018 2:26:00 PM
Hospital --- What Aladdin will be sad in! ~ Gershon

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