Aladdin Without Paddin'

There once was a boy named Aladdin
Who played hockey without any paddin'
   He forgot to duck
   And got struck by the puck
Now a cast is what Aladdin's clad in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:24 PM
I should think so; those pucks are hard and when traveling fast...ouch! Cute limerick.
Wolf Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Yes, indeed: A puck run amok...
Faulkner Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 4:19 PM
His cast/he's probably not 'glad in'! :)
Wolf Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:13 PM
You got that right! Thanks, Michelle!
Onclaud Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 7:23 AM
chuckling all over, gershon... much enjoyed!..huggs
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one, nette. Thank you for your encouragement! Best wishes, Gershon
Bangalee Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Mr. Aladdin, maid chamber of hospital invites you//// nice
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Hospital --- What Aladdin will be sad in! ~ Gershon
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