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Aint Staying Gold

I like my steak rare With lots of pepper because well is not so well when dry. I run in the rain so I don't have feel my sweat on my body. It's true I wake up before the sun rises, I beat him every time. I'm already filled with sand, so ill be one less the sandman has to work on. I'm already at my highest peak before the stats appear. I'm already down hill before the pile of ****. Im still at the top of the mountain waiting for that one chick to stop singing and get over this hill. At the End of the day I like to end with my coffee and smoke the same way- black and mild.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/6/2012 1:34:00 PM
Like yours end of the day....and lovely written poem Ricardo,well done.You are welcome to read and comments some of mine poem. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/26/2012 4:22:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ricardo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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