Agony of Loss

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In the midst of your cries of anguish. This time, weary to watch the spirit languish. It's been simple to feel your pain. It has left you with deep scars and slain. I have seen where your pain has taken its toll. And held your sufferings close to my soul. Your losses have echoed in my heart. I've backed your case, we've never been apart. Written: May 23, 2023

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/24/2023 12:53:00 PM

Sotto, your kind soul radiates through these words, it’s hard to see someone you love in pain, emotionally or physically. As you know I had to watch my husband suffer from having sepsis, yet I suffered too and still do, the anguish and anxiety has never gone away. I’m touched deeply by this poem and it’s a comforting read. Bless you, Belle

Valsa George

Date: 5/23/2023 8:35:00 PM

Having a compassionate heart to feel another's pain and be a source of comfort is so laudable. Your sympathetic attitude is much appreciated.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/23/2023 4:24:00 PM

Much anguish your words convey. Loss is always painful.