Age Tell No More Lies

I had heard grandeur speeches
    of wisdom and power
    Eternal tales of grandeur and glory
    legends WHISPERING through the times of days

    Since I have sprouted, grey I've become
    such legends are smoke, 
    fading with distance 
    and a 'striving after the wind'

    WELCOMED-AGE, WHERE IS YOUR SPLENDOUR NOW?
    Have I not been patient
    I know gentler tales that have been kinder
    and the years more brutal
    than truthful

    The time dilation and empty spaces,
    chronic aches and endless boredom
    Fading memories with stale hearings
    a eager spirit but a failing body

    Where was my promised crown
    earned through perspiration of living
    Where is the glory and splendor


    If only our voices were melodic
    and our words carried more weight
    How we would DISPEL these tales
    and pummel through progress

    Yet age kept on backbiting
    injecting through its virulent fangs
    extruding all the knowledge to share
    subjugating all my pleasures

    I found myself in lost
    Wanting of the youth I wasted,
    pondering upon my crown
    The lies that I was fed,
    Lies that I now bear,
    my crown of thorns,
      a MARTYR's 
          crown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Poteet Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Ah, I hear you, sometimes we try too hard on our own, ignoring overriding the power source within. Your vocabulary is strong here, well-done (check: grandiose, grandeur, whisperings and dispel) and it will be perfected. Great thoughts for the upcoming Easter season, your last stanza is my favorite. We are guilty or maybe responsible would be the better word for the thorns in our crown. I truly enjoyed your piece, the first one of the morning, March 7th, National Cereal Day.
Hlabisa Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:39 PM
By the way... thanks for the correction... completely missed it... lol
Hlabisa Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Hi reason Thank you for the encouraging and positive words. It has taken me some time to pen this down and redrafting to get across my meaning.
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