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Age Doesn'T Matter When You'Re In Love

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Age Doesn’t Matter When You’re In Love The dance changes as the music fades slippers shuffling on worn floors lust lurking in the shadows lingering moments. Their hands still find each other as they walk, connecting them to all that follows, empowering them to move into an aging future. He still gazes at her beauty, counts himself a lucky man. She smiles, knowing he is looking at her still. They slyly sneak upstairs engage in flannel foreplay snuggle warmly against one another – remembering. The dance continues. John G. Lawless ©12/8/2017

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Date: 12/8/2017 6:03:00 PM
oh you took it a very warm and wonderful way, JOhn!!! Love this sweet poetry.
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:31:00 PM
Simply lovely John...
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Date: 12/8/2017 8:16:00 AM
Awwwhhhh ... this is such a sweet, heartwarming write John!! I really love it! I hope that in my old age I have someone to appreciate me in that way. ;)
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