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Afterglow

The air, white with rain so dense it looked like snow, fell straight and strong in drops huge and heavy presenting an impervious wall of water. "You'd be soaked to the skin in two minutes flat," he said. It stopped as suddenly as it had begun, leaving a strange after-light in air as clean and crisp as just washed lettuce. The sudden stillness and absence of sound brought an eerie peacefulness and a sharp awareness of the hidden power controlling one's destiny Cona F. Adams, 9/7/11

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Date: 12/7/2017 11:30:00 AM
This poem is an evocative masterpiece. Enjoyed crisp as lettuce, and you captured the aftermath of storm with great precision and feeling. It's relationship to hidden power and destiny leave much to ponder. And thus I pause and wonder.
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Date: 10/17/2016 6:56:00 PM
How many of us view the deluge from the safety of our comfortable homes or offices, thankful that we are missing the worst of it. You tip this on its head and call to mind every sunset, every rainbow that I've missed in my privileged and much sheltered life. "Afterglow" indeed! Hope tonight is a date night!? Ha! Makes me hunger for my PeaceCorps days in Africa living mostly in a tent where I actually witnessed triple rainbows. Do you write anything but 7's I wonder?
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Date: 10/6/2016 6:32:00 PM
I missed reading this poem Cona. You were gone for a while and it is so nice to see another post from you. I adore rain and your expression so captures the 'afterglow' perfect word and title for this beautiful piece. A 7 for this beauty! ; )
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Date: 8/19/2016 10:57:00 AM
Love the personification!! Great poem!
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Cona Adams
Date: 8/19/2016 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Joe DiMino for visiting to read, and for the encouragement. So glad you enjoyed it. Have a great week!
Date: 8/17/2016 11:47:00 AM
You superbly describe the afterglow of that sudden burst of rain, Cona. I can both picture and feel it. A lovely ending to go with it! ~ Regards // paul
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Cona Adams
Date: 8/17/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and the encouragement, Paul. All the best to you and yours.
Date: 8/9/2016 6:52:00 AM
This is a picture in words Cona. All the great poems make you 'see' what your reading. Love this one. Anne
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Cona Adams
Date: 8/9/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne, for your encouraging comment. All the best to you!'

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