Premiere Contest WinnerAfter the Sunset

After the sunset 
I lie quietly beside you 
feeling the warmth 
of your body against my own, 
mine beginning where yours ends, 
masculinity to your soft contours. 

After the sunset 
I listen to the quiet contentedness 
of your breathing; each breath 
exhaled from slightly parted lips 
upon which a few minutes before 
endless passion radiated. 

After the sunset 
the fragrance of our love 
lingers lightly in the air. 
My body still tingles from the 
hours that we shared 
caught up in the magic of desire. 

After the sunset 
as peaceful fulfillment woos me 
and I begin to drift away, 
smiling, I move even closer to you 
with the knowledge that 
sunset will come again another day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Jones Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 3:46 PM
Belated congratulations on a much deserved win Ron!
VanHooser Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:30 PM
Thanks Karen! I appreciate you My Friend! Try a couple of my newer ones posted in the last few days, I think you will find them interesting. All the best, Ron
Peck Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Beautiful! Congrats on your big win!
VanHooser Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Thanks Ann! I finally released this poem into the wild and it has amazed me at how well it has done. I appreciate your comment, and I am glad you liked this one. Thanks again. Ron
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 11:29 PM
I tried to comment earlier when the captcha was not working. Excellent poem. So well deserving of the trophy win!
VanHooser Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 3:18 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I've not even placed in so many contests lately that I was getting dejected, that made this one a huge surprise. Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you liked this one. All the best, Ron
Sultan Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 9:07 AM
Asalam Alikum! A work of striking beauty , romantic in tone, vibrant in imagination, and brimming with emotion. It holds passion and purity together in one space, letting each sharpen the other without contradiction.??
VanHooser Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 1:47 PM
Thank you for this wonderful comment! I'm glad you liked this poem and I appreciate your kind words. Thanks for taking the time to read my work and provide feedback! Ron
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 8:06 PM
masculinity to your soft contours… exhaled from slightly parted lips… the fragrance of our love lingers lightly in the air…Congrats on top win with this sensual write!
VanHooser Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:19 PM
Thanks Kim! It has surprised me at the response this poem has received, and to my shock...it has all been good...at least so far! LOL Seriously, I'm glad you liked it and thank you for your kind words. Ron
Brul Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 4:28 AM
Very romantic! The last stanza is delicately woven in a way that touches the soul. Congratulations on your trophy win!! fave!!!! ^___^
VanHooser Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:20 PM
Thank you! This poem stemmed from a memory of long ago that is still fresh and rich in detail in my mind. Thank you for taking the time to read my work and comment, I appreciate it. Ron
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