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After the Strong Wind With Rain Showers

The rain was pouring A strong wind blowing All through the afternoon T The ground soaking wet Brown grass turned green Daisies in the flower beds Was forced to the ground By the very strong wind When the storm was over The daisies in the garden Showed a heart shape Designed by Mother nature

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Date: 8/13/2020 4:32:00 PM
Very original, well penned write.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2020 10:13:00 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser, Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 8/12/2020 2:14:00 PM
Nice penning Darlene, good one indeed! Take care, Gordon
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2020 2:38:00 PM
Hello Gordon, Thank you Gordon. Take care my friend. Enjoy your evening .
Date: 8/4/2020 9:48:00 AM
A beautiful poem my friend. There is hope during the storm that all will be well when it all passes.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2020 2:51:00 PM
Hello Michael Thompson, yes there is hope after a storm when it passes by. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 8/1/2020 7:45:00 AM
Relief...We will experience this when the pandemic is over...Nice one
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/1/2020 11:00:00 AM
Hello Arturo Micheal, I wish that the pendemic was over. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/28/2020 4:12:00 PM
Hi Darlene, What a beautiful poem, I love the ending. Look after yourself. Frances
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2020 5:30:00 AM
Hello Frances Byrne, thank you Frances,Mohter nature is beautiful to design a mast piece. I will and you do the same. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/28/2020 12:18:00 PM
Lovely...how the daisies had a heart shape Well wriiten.. Panagiota
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Date: 7/28/2020 3:23:00 PM
Hello Panagiota,it was Mother's natures design. So beautiful to see. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
Date: 7/27/2020 6:56:00 AM
Hello Darlene mam, Your poem is raining too:-)Enjoyed it. I believe you had a heavy rain shower today. I like the line~Brown grass turned green..I suppose the grass had a good bath:-D Have a blissful day.:-)Much love
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 10:30:00 AM
Hello Deepa,it has been very hot and humid here, the down pour of rain was needed. It was very brown. So the grass had a good soaking.Much love Darlene
Date: 7/27/2020 1:28:00 AM
Peaceful or angry, nature displays its beauty in a majestic way, dearest Darlene! Excellently written! Hugs xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:01:00 AM
Hello Demetrios, yes demetrios Mother nature does display beauty in nature. Hugs Darlene xxx
Date: 7/26/2020 9:54:00 PM
Lovely write Darlene.. I loved the mother nature's design..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:02:00 AM
Hello Jenish Somadas, so do IJanish. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/26/2020 8:53:00 PM
That must have been a mighty breeze! How sweet that in the end, nature offers up a gift! Have a wonderful evening, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:04:00 AM
Hello Thomas Wells, those flowers designed into a heart shape. So beautiful. A lovely gift of nature. Enjoy your day my friend.

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