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After the Rain

The gloomy storm brightens drab city streets, leaving mirror puddles on cold black tar cleansing red blood from curbs of violence, fetid odors of stale fomented beer. The sweat of the city evaporates, invading nostrils like a down hill sewer inhaling, a gutter gully gusher. Steam bellows forth in systematic bursts, aborting unwanted vapor pressure in subterranean tunnel caverns from pitted, porous, perforated pipes. The city bathes itself in acid rain scoring concrete, etching brick, eating flesh. This cities' long needed bath is last seen floating away, skimming old power lines toward the next open manhole in its path.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2009 1:32:00 PM
Fav... Just wanted to get that out of the way... Amazing word-play friend, I must read more from you...Congrats on the feature.....:JP}
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Date: 7/26/2009 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured, never like the big city but I did enjoy this read.
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:06:00 PM
Brought it all back for me, Bill and I can't say I miss that part of living in a big city ... LOL ... excellent imagery and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2009 1:10:00 PM
Congrats Bill on the featuring of "After The Rain." Vince
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando
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Date: 7/19/2009 4:25:00 PM
Wow soo descriptive well done! Congratulations on your featured poem well done! Laura :)
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:28:00 PM
Described as if one can sit and watch the storm as it passes through! Congratulations on this featured poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:30:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:24:00 PM
great feature! Bill! you are a remarkable poet! this poem reminds me of my few visits to Manhattan! with beggars and thieves, suits and hustlers sharing humanity....cool write! jim
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Date: 7/19/2009 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Bill. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2009 5:52:00 AM
A write so true Bill, what will this planet look like in a few thousand years, rancid and rotten? >>James
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:35:00 PM
Like your Iambic Pentameter, Bill. Interesting theme. Sara
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Date: 7/16/2009 4:43:00 PM
most excellent and I love the alliteration! Welcome to the soup. Light & Love
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Date: 7/16/2009 2:26:00 PM
great poem. welcome to poetry soup! check out some of my poems
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