After the Rain

The gloomy storm brightens drab city streets,
leaving mirror puddles on cold black tar
cleansing red blood from curbs of violence,
fetid odors of stale fomented beer.
The sweat of the city evaporates,
invading nostrils like a down hill sewer
inhaling, a gutter gully gusher.
Steam bellows forth in systematic bursts,
aborting unwanted vapor pressure
in subterranean tunnel caverns
from pitted, porous, perforated pipes.
The city bathes itself in acid rain
scoring concrete, etching brick, eating flesh.
This cities' long needed bath is last seen
floating away, skimming old power lines
toward the next open manhole in its path.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 1:32 PM
Fav... Just wanted to get that out of the way... Amazing word-play friend, I must read more from you...Congrats on the feature.....:JP}
Nutter Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 4:26 AM
Congratulations on being featured, never like the big city but I did enjoy this read.
Mason Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Brought it all back for me, Bill and I can't say I miss that part of living in a big city ... LOL ... excellent imagery and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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July 23, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Congrats Bill on the featuring of "After The Rain." Vince
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July 21, 2009 at 10:17 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando
Mckenzie Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Wow soo descriptive well done! Congratulations on your featured poem well done! Laura :)
Richards Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Described as if one can sit and watch the storm as it passes through! Congratulations on this featured poem! ~ Carrie
Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week>>James
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July 19, 2009 at 2:30 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
Goff Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 2:24 PM
great feature! Bill! you are a remarkable poet! this poem reminds me of my few visits to Manhattan! with beggars and thieves, suits and hustlers sharing humanity....cool write! jim
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Bill. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 5:52 AM
A write so true Bill, what will this planet look like in a few thousand years, rancid and rotten? >>James
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 3:35 PM
Like your Iambic Pentameter, Bill. Interesting theme. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 4:43 PM
most excellent and I love the alliteration! Welcome to the soup. Light & Love
Meadows Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 2:26 PM
great poem. welcome to poetry soup! check out some of my poems
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