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After the Rain

The soft rain falls, but after it stops a bright sun winks; and a twinkling embraces like a golden shawl, and warmth on my world- sinks. Oh, the twinkling and sparkling is beautifully grand, it is like Mother Earth has raised up her gentle hand; 'cause she had this scene planned- I gaze 'til the sky darkens again to rainfall . . . ______________________________ October 14, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/After the Rain Copyright Protected, ID 10-1295-131-14 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, . . . . And So I Wrote A Poem sponsor, John Lawless Fourth Place

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Date: 10/21/2020 9:11:00 AM
I love this, Constance! Brilliant. I love the feeling that comes after a rain :) Beautifully and brilliantly done. God bless you
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Date: 10/22/2020 10:22:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the love and compliment, yes, after the rain when the sun comes out is a magical time _Constance
Date: 10/20/2020 2:04:00 PM
"a twinkling embraces like a golden shawl". Great line amid a vivid vision. Thanks for entering the contest Constance
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Date: 10/21/2020 7:19:00 AM
John, thanks for an inspiring contest and for my placement and compliment on my poem, I love that line too_Constance
Date: 10/15/2020 3:20:00 AM
Ah so delicate and lovely like a gentle rain.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/16/2020 9:01:00 AM
Caren, thanks for the compliment on my poem _Constance
Date: 10/14/2020 5:34:00 PM
Rainfall begins and ends your thoughts!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/16/2020 9:01:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the comment and visit _Constance
Date: 10/14/2020 1:27:00 PM
Nice one! keep that pen in ink!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/16/2020 9:02:00 AM
Gorden, thank you for the compliment on my writing _Constance

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