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After the Party No More Fun

The party was so much fun, now the night is done. As the sun comes up, we see the broken cup. What a mess they made, that spot will not fade. If only I did not hurt so much, I might go out for lunch. After the party I must pay, there is a hole in the rug and not the ashtray. Date: 6/27/2019 Congratulations, this is just a quick notice to let you know that your poem After "The Party No More Fun" is one of the poems being featured on the PoetrySoup home page this week. 9/27/2020

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Date: 7/17/2019 12:44:00 AM
Haha found this amusing as well! True enough if you're the one paying, it's not so much fun :p
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2019 11:07:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your note...
Date: 6/29/2019 8:20:00 PM
I think these people were at my house as well. Love the hole in rug... Wonderful read. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2019 4:07:00 PM
"Thank You" for your note. It is great to hear from another writer. Keep on writing.

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