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After the Party

No more whiskey; no more pills No more void to try and fill No more tears; no more broken heart No more hitting bottom; no more brand new starts No more excuses; no poor poor me No more swimming in a pool of gluttony No more bad days-with bad nights to follow No more emptiness; my heart no longer hollow No more wishing; no more let downs No more waiting; for whose not around No more dwelling on my negative past No more because I found true love at last

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Date: 6/23/2013 6:34:00 AM
Good morning, Melissa congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LIND
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Date: 6/10/2013 8:23:00 PM
MELISSA, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/8/2013 12:43:00 PM
Hello Melissa, . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/8/2013 6:04:00 AM
Hi, Melissa. A well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2013 6:01:00 AM
Love has the power to make positive changes.I enjoyed perusing your poem Melissa.
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