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After the Footlocker Bouquet

After the Footlocker Bouquet Naïve I went my separate way. Facing a falsehood…promised love. Yes, I remember well that day. Forever fit us like a glove. My hand was promised to someone. I knew not he loved another. We too, in fields of dreams had run. True love, I did not discover. You stood strong as you watched me leave. Loss was forever locked that day. Upon wild flowers, dreams still cleave. Fantasies in pressed blossoms stay. © Dane Smith-Johnsen April 27, 2010 Poetic Form Quatrain

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Date: 4/27/2010 10:59:00 AM
sad and sweet as love oft is..........Light & Love
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:27:00 AM
Interesting love loss poem that is emotive, descriptive, and expressive..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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