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April.14.2024
After the Floods Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Anoucheka Gangabissoon
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After the Floods

Dark clouds loomed over the horizon They broke loose in unprecedented force Nature’s wrath, sudden violence acquired It rained down as if unleashing all her fury It was a downpour without one equal The heavens let down dark misery for days on end, Water bodies swelled and hollows filled, Land mass slipped and trees fell, The tame rivers looked fierce in spate. Waves surfed and waters roared, Like mountains they rose over the land, Men in throngs were evicted from their homes, Hundreds died and livestock perished Such violence, never ever imagined Helter-skelter, people fled for life. Lands inundated and folks were marooned, Homes were washed away with all belongings Power failed and life had come to a halt Rescue operations went on in full swing But the deluge chanted the dirge of dying souls Men sought shelter in relief camps Epidemics broke loose and many died Hospitals were flooded with ailing souls Crops perished and misery prevailed Havoc wreaked and penury struck As Nature thus played her perfidious tricks, Men stayed united and pooled all their might, To regain for their land what had been lost In a matter of months life was back to normal It was a time that displayed man’s great resilience.
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Canerdy Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 8:55 AM
Valsa, CONGRATS on your win with this superb poem~~such expressive use of personification! Janice
George Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Such a sight to watch people go through bitter experiences. Nature dances in tunes we do not understand sometimes, we either dance with her or sway in her wrath. Our greatest pride is our history and unity. Loved the piece.
Poet Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Dear Valsa, I must say, that your perspective on the contest is spot on. This poem is a powerful reminder that we human beings are capable of enduring and overcoming whatever obstacle we face. A declaration of optimism and perseverance in the face of hardship, it brings to mind the importance of familial ties and the strength that comes from standing together during times of crisis. Hearing about the devastation is horrible, but hearing about how resilient humans are is beautiful. You described what happened in a really beautiful lyrical style.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 8:06 AM
I enjoyed reading your "After The Floods" write. Have a wonderful week....................
Empress Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Dear sweet valsa! Another brilliant write! And like silent one has said below, i senses the unity and how in times of crisis, people come together to overcome the adversities especially as you wrote “ As Nature thus played her perfidious tricks, Men stayed united and pooled all their might” i must also highlight your opening lines and the ending! So good! So creatively phrased and it is definitely moving and fitting for the prompt theme too! You do it effortlessly! I think you are just a natural! I also love the lines “ Lands inundated and folks were marooned, Homes were washed away with all belongings Power failed and life had come to a halt Rescue operations went on in full swing“ soul hitting really! Best wishes for the contest! Another fave for me
One Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 6:54 AM
An excellent take on the contest my friend.. The poem serves as a testament to the strength of the human spirit and the capacity to endure and overcome even the most formidable challenges. It reminds us of the bonds of community and the power of solidarity in times of crisis, offering a message of hope and resilience in the face of adversity
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April 14, 2024 at 4:33 AM
Valsa, that is terrible to learn of the destruction, but wonderful to learn of humankinds resilient. You told of the happening in a very good poetic way. We have had flooding and some of the same situations over here this past year and into this year. The snow melts also caused problems. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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