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After, the Deaths

Once full of beauty with flowers in hair, lost in darkness- my existence threadbare; death is my heavy cloak, I am a girl heart-broke. In dreams I float among grey headstones, life departs and I lay with dead bones; I have no future- only dark unknowns. I scream in agony at night, weeping sad prayers I recite; writing sorrow by candlelight. I dream of that girl with flowers, with dark eyes and ruby fingers. I ask you, do you have any answers? Is there any way out of this picture? I wish for a blue sky azure. __________________________ September 8, 2017 Rhyme Verse/After, The Deaths Copyright Protected, ID 93886 Written for the contest, Poems That Paint A Picture sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 9/13/2017 6:27:00 PM
congratulations Constance, as usual, dark poetry flows well from your pen...
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Date: 9/13/2017 1:21:00 PM
Lovely poem BW--wonderful weaving of words--the questions you raise are just intriguing as the painting--Congrats for your win!
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:51:00 AM
I am moved by this dark yet beautifully written piece, Constance. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:21:00 AM
So well written BW ... Very powerfully expressed emotions ... Congratulations on your nice win ... Thank you for liking my Ecstasy and congratulating on its placement ...
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:09:00 AM
A powerful poem and read Broken Wings, congrats :)
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:48:00 AM
Deep and emotive write Constance.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/11/2017 10:25:00 AM
I wrote a piece on aging a few years back. It was a difficult write because I was really struggling with the reality of my mortality at the time. Of course, eventually I have accepted it and grown to appreciate the benefits and wisdom that comes with it all but it was a struggle for awhile. Wonderful write x
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Date: 9/9/2017 4:34:00 AM
Wow, Constance, this is an incredible write! You have written quite the emotionally charged poem, one that is full of powerful images of the night and still there is hope! I surely enjoyed reading your lovely piece this morning! What a superior poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:28:00 PM
Can feel the emotion...floating among grey headstones. A worthy write!
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