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After Six Days of Work

After Six Days of Work After six days of work, God was tired. Relaxation I bet he required. So just what did he do that whole seventh day through? We all know he’s not really retired! Was he chilling out at the North Pole, hibernating or searching his soul? Could he have been instead in a nice comfy bed calling out like he were old King Cole? No idea of what he’d have done do I have in my mind. Anyone want to hazard a guess? Well, there is ONE thing -YES! I’m for sure he hung out with his son! Nov. 2, 2018 for Curtis Moorman's What Did God Do On The Seventh Day? Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/23/2018 3:13:00 PM
LOL, very clever write - wanted to read this as you mentioned it
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Date: 11/12/2018 1:10:00 AM
Ha! I love it! I had to come read right away, and I knew I'd be rewarded ... this is fun and whimsical, and I thoroughly enjoyed it, Buddy! Blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 11/7/2018 7:07:00 AM
What a great take on the theme - nicely done, Andrea... hope this does well in the contest. Regards, John.
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Date: 11/2/2018 9:42:00 PM
Nicely thought out, but left me wondering how he produced a son? I suppose time will tell . . . Good luck! Aloha! Rico
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/3/2018 10:33:00 AM
He is Alpha and omega. Time without end. Who is to say we did not live as spirits before he created an earth to put everyone on!
Date: 11/2/2018 2:50:00 PM
Your ending line is perfecto!
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Date: 11/2/2018 12:27:00 PM
Quality time with his Son. Of course, Andrea. Very clever.
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Date: 11/2/2018 12:02:00 PM
Loving sentiments in the last line..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 11/2/2018 11:19:00 AM
This was really cool Andrea. The last line was awesome. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 11/2/2018 10:06:00 AM
I'm sure whatever he did was heavenly. Well written limerick Andrea. Tom.
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Date: 11/2/2018 10:05:00 AM
This is lovely, Andrea! I enjoyed the image of Him calling out like old King Cole, and loved the ending, too! ;) Well done!
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