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After Nine In the Evening

There is a wave of New Orleans music I cannot grasp... it throbs inside me swooning, crawling quivering as whiffs of tempo gyrate around nine seventeen pm in a bistro: the sax, piano, drums railing notes on crest of wild grace, ever buoyant amid sultry air. And I listen to a groove vibrate , rousing the marrow of my body with primordial tones livening classic groans and modern jazz-- that my hips cavort in a dance unbidden, a fire rippling along bursts of instinctive thrill: four hours after nine seventeen pm-- near twilight’s cadence lilting upon my bosom-- I jam joggle jive floating in crazed matters that no longer matter. Brian's Strand no 770

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/17/2018 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/15/2018 11:05:00 AM
...and to think I was sitting in a pub in wet clothes alone whilst you strutted your stuff in this contest, nette. Lovely write, captures a mood and place, well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/15/2018 3:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win. the last line is superb.
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Date: 7/14/2018 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:47:00 AM
Lost in your own beautiful world. A sultry, sensual write that leaves one wishing they could lose themselves beside you in your world. A very enjoyable read Nette.
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:22:00 AM
...Now if Viv had only been waiting for you..Nette, when I read this I closed the windows so the celebration wouldn't wake the neighbors. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:18:00 AM
A winner for me! Congratulations on your placement nette, Mick
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Date: 7/6/2018 2:47:00 AM
This is strikingly beautiful, Nette. Your words take me there with you and I lose myself in the atmosphere which you so ably created. No wonder that at 1am nothing else seems to matter:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/6/2018 12:57:00 AM
Nette, you writing about the power of music.. leaves me speechless. Then you descriptively accentuate its euphoric effect on you.. leaving me spellbound! Your poem is a cadenced spring of natural flow and positive energy!
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:50:00 PM
I especially love the ending: "floating in crazed matters that no longer matter". Music will do that.
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Date: 7/5/2018 1:57:00 PM
- The sound of your words gives rhythm to your poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 1:57:00 PM
You painted a rhythmic evening in cadence of music..lovely poem, nette..hope you win, BIG.
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