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On a blooming boulevard of beautiful palm trees, Fragrances and fronds fluttered in fresh breeze, Sunset parakeets perched in a purple twilit town, Hushed moonlight mellowed after the meltdown. For: YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE Poetry Contest Sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/19/2021 9:10:00 AM

Stunning verse, Evelyn. For instance, there are several rhyming phrases. The video and the picture were a good choice too.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/19/2021 9:22:00 AM

I am so pleased. Your enjoyment of this verse is very rewarding. Thank you for your thoughts.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/18/2021 11:23:00 PM

Super stanza. And lovely alliterations. Can't see this extract fail a high post. Hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/19/2021 9:11:00 AM

Thank you for those heartening thoughts, Victor. Hugs