AFT THE STORM

aft’ the storm’s the cure
the salt licks his face

though trenches’s formed
as foam settles down

will his Tessie rest
in his windward eyes

will she lay on his treasure chest
hearing the ebb and flow

as his vocal cords desist
from commanding mates

to feel the siren’s call,
to salve the absinthium,

absolve him with ecstasy
will she be there at all

or has the sail been torn
by the storm that rages within

will the Captain choose
to down the bitter sea water

drown in his rusty pipes
as Betsy sits on his shoulder

his eye rolled down the plank
he patched up the hole

Tessie’s tears are the seas
the salt assaults her

the Captain once hit Tessie
with a bottle…the ship

he’d never hurt the girl
who always waits on the shore

wait! wait!
he does come

he finds she’s a wild one
able to handle sea monsters

Tessie’s hand swats Betsy away
puts her in a cage

traps the man of her dreams
they both dream the same dream
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Hind Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:04 PM
Haunting, love "they both dream the same dream" at the end- can one see the depth of that?!?
Buhagiar Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:26 AM
What a delightful love story. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:40 AM
So glad you thought so! You so inspire me, sweet friend! :)
Mo Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:06 AM
I choose to read this on the surface because I like pirate movies :) You have portrayed complexities of relationships using this metaphor
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, Marugu! We’d hate real pirates but give us the “romance of the sea.”
Baker Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 6:13 PM
Very creative poetry, my friend. A salty tale of the sea. Putting away the temptations of the siren and he got a double win. The ship got him through the storm, and he got the girl of his dreams. Happy ending, my kind of story. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, Kim, thanks for sharing your talents with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:41 AM
I always appreciate you, Bill! Thank you!
Rodgers Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 2:13 PM
Dear Kim, what a captivating journey through the tumultuous seas of love and redemption. The imagery of the storm's aftermath, with its salty aftermath and the tension between the characters, evokes a sense of raw emotion and longing. The interplay of forgiveness, resilience, and desire is beautifully woven into the narrative, leaving me pondering the complexities of human relationships. Beautiful! Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 4:49 PM
Thank you for noticing the complexities! Blessings, Daniel!
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