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AFT THE STORM

aft’ the storm’s the cure the salt licks his face though trenches’s formed as foam settles down will his Tessie rest in his windward eyes will she lay on his treasure chest hearing the ebb and flow as his vocal cords desist from commanding mates to feel the siren’s call, to salve the absinthium, absolve him with ecstasy will she be there at all or has the sail been torn by the storm that rages within will the Captain choose to down the bitter sea water drown in his rusty pipes as Betsy sits on his shoulder his eye rolled down the plank he patched up the hole Tessie’s tears are the seas the salt assaults her the Captain once hit Tessie with a bottle…the ship he’d never hurt the girl who always waits on the shore wait! wait! he does come he finds she’s a wild one able to handle sea monsters Tessie’s hand swats Betsy away puts her in a cage traps the man of her dreams they both dream the same dream

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Date: 4/8/2024 6:04:00 PM
Haunting, love "they both dream the same dream" at the end- can one see the depth of that?!?
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:26:00 AM
What a delightful love story. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2024 9:40:00 AM
So glad you thought so! You so inspire me, sweet friend! :)
Date: 4/7/2024 3:06:00 AM
I choose to read this on the surface because I like pirate movies :) You have portrayed complexities of relationships using this metaphor
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2024 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Marugu! We’d hate real pirates but give us the “romance of the sea.”
Date: 4/4/2024 6:13:00 PM
Very creative poetry, my friend. A salty tale of the sea. Putting away the temptations of the siren and he got a double win. The ship got him through the storm, and he got the girl of his dreams. Happy ending, my kind of story. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, Kim, thanks for sharing your talents with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2024 9:41:00 AM
I always appreciate you, Bill! Thank you!
Date: 4/3/2024 3:59:00 PM
a surprise ending to a captivating journey--perhaps a metaphorical journey of longing and understanding human relationships. Such subtly in your imagery. A delightful read, Kim! Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2024 4:49:00 PM
that last line significant… thank you!xx
Date: 4/3/2024 2:13:00 PM
Dear Kim, what a captivating journey through the tumultuous seas of love and redemption. The imagery of the storm's aftermath, with its salty aftermath and the tension between the characters, evokes a sense of raw emotion and longing. The interplay of forgiveness, resilience, and desire is beautifully woven into the narrative, leaving me pondering the complexities of human relationships. Beautiful! Blessings, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2024 4:49:00 PM
Thank you for noticing the complexities! Blessings, Daniel!

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