Affection of Older Autumn

It  is late September  again,
  effervescent,  fair---much like 
the  first  touch of air-brushed flame
 seizing  an ardor glazed by
an ever- changing pastel light… 
 we are still here,
 on autumnal  view's entrance
breathing sweet ambrosia 
from life's harvest...perhaps older
as grey marbles collected through
fables of silence together : our weary
bodies are held by endless glow past mid-life,
recalling youth's  blazed affection
while evening fog embraces us,
through a tender  contentment 
of devotion's soft kisses.


Contest 340 for  Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Hello Nette, your poem is beautifully written for the season autumn. Have anice evening my friend.
Inman Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Nette, I feel you.
La France Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Nette, beautifully penned CONGRATULATIONS!
Walker Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:03 AM
Nette, the words of your poem are beautiful to read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your top win. ~ Sonia
Canerdy Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 11:08 PM
Very lovely, Nette! Congrats on your top win! Janice
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Whew! Caliente sensuous poetry, Nette. Never knew nature love could arouse such passion. Autumn sparks are more than just fall's blazing colors. Picture perfect poem w/sizzling imagery. Love and hugs forever.
Daniel Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Brilliant and beautiful, Nette:)
Kimathi Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Brilliant write as always, Nette! Thanks for sharing this literary gem with us! :-)
Hamilton Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 11:44 PM
Wonderful write Nette, your pen flows golden in this write, sure to be a winner, it is in my book anyway!
Roper Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:40 PM
Nette, this stunning my vision was the outdoors was in love with autumn more than lovers .. just beautiful .. hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Nette, this is absolutely brilliant. FAVE!
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Wow, Nette, you have outdone yourself with your incredible write! I really enjoyed reading this delightful autumnal treat you have left for us to read this afternoon! What a glorious piece, you have enthralled me completely by this beautiful poem my friend! Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 2:05 PM
A wondrous poem dearest, nette! The magic of the language used obliterates the autumn's beauty! Hugs! Good luck!
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 1:28 PM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - The last line is perfect :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 12:54 PM
can I live the life you write about?a very sensual poem that leads the mind from one flower to another...good luck
Wanter Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:07 AM
I really enjoyed this, Nette!
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:01 AM
A wonderful melody written with precious words--lovely as always--best wishes for a win, nette!
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