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In class, the aerodynamics of thought - the engineer commandeers our papers. She wears a blindfold over mouth and nose, trains us on how to crease and navigate. The solid white and dotted lines, on course. Teach’ will enforce sans imagination. Argumentation on the plane - not good. It will set sail - students will stay in line. The race is on, some fast, some slow, no-goes. Leader nods approval to bobbing heads. A seamless exercise in full control. But, today, here I am with crimson paper tucked into my binder. It opens eyes. Without boundaries, abruptly I crease the wrinkles of the teacher - she demands that I cease. I can’t hear her - she’s muffled behind the ridiculous cloth, of lack of common sense, and pomp; her eyes seething. I complete my assignment filled with glee. The path I take in life, adventurous. I’m weaving left and right. I’m not unseen. I break the sound barrier, and speed of light. My fuselage - twenty-four seven lit. I lift past the classroom, way past normal, until my death. The teacher grabs my plane, tears it up…”will not be tolerated!” She hands me a page - a solid white sheet. I paint it bright red, concealing the dots.

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Date: 9/15/2022 6:28:00 AM
Well, Kim, not surprising to find you coloring outside the lines and flying outside the "radar" screens limits. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2022 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 8/19/2022 4:36:00 AM
Such a profound write. A sure winner!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thank you, JCB! xx
Date: 8/19/2022 2:03:00 AM
Excellent and creative Kim, A masterclass in how to make paper aeroplanes with class, in class, and so much more imagination embedded throughout, A top poem for the contest, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, David! :)
Date: 8/17/2022 8:31:00 PM
Kim I love this. I think we have a winner here. Either way it was clever and witty and a winner for me...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2022 3:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mike! That mean a lot to me.
Date: 8/17/2022 6:47:00 PM
Ha, ha! As Yogi Berra once quipped: 'When you come to a fork in the road, take it!' Good one, Rebel.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2022 8:06:00 PM
Thanks ;)

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