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Aerodynamics of Thought

In class, the aerodynamics of thought -
the engineer commandeers our papers.
She wears a blindfold over mouth and nose,
trains us on how to crease and navigate.

The solid white and dotted lines, on course.
Teach’ will enforce sans imagination.
Argumentation on the plane - not good.
It will set sail - students will stay in line.

The race is on, some fast, some slow, no-goes.
Leader nods approval to bobbing heads.
A seamless exercise in full control.
But, today, here I am with crimson paper

tucked into my binder. It opens eyes.
Without boundaries, abruptly I crease
the wrinkles of the teacher - she demands
that I cease. I can’t hear her - she’s muffled

behind the ridiculous cloth, of lack
of common sense, and pomp;  her eyes seething.
I complete my assignment filled with glee.
The path I take in life, adventurous.

I’m weaving left and right. I’m not unseen.
I break the sound barrier, and speed of
light. My fuselage - twenty-four seven lit.
I lift past the classroom, way past normal,

until my death. The teacher grabs my plane,
tears it up…”will not be tolerated!”
She hands me a page - a solid white sheet.
I paint it bright red, concealing the dots.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Well, Kim, not surprising to find you coloring outside the lines and flying outside the "radar" screens limits. Thanks for participating in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 5:33 AM
Thank you, John!
Brul Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 4:36 AM
Such a profound write. A sure winner!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 4:42 AM
Thank you, JCB! xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 2:03 AM
Excellent and creative Kim, A masterclass in how to make paper aeroplanes with class, in class, and so much more imagination embedded throughout, A top poem for the contest, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 4:42 AM
Thank you so much, David! :)
Tor Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Kim I love this. I think we have a winner here. Either way it was clever and witty and a winner for me...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 3:49 AM
Thank you so much, Mike! That mean a lot to me.
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 6:47 PM
Ha, ha! As Yogi Berra once quipped: 'When you come to a fork in the road, take it!' Good one, Rebel.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 8:06 PM
Thanks ;)
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