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oh to recall youth that last bastion of bliss - so this is progress entered silent one's 'When plans don't go to plan' Contest 28/8/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2020 2:51:00 PM

Congrats for the win, Harry. Happy Sunday to you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2020 8:40:00 PM

Love the ambiguity of this one, Harry. You've hit the jackpot. No recall for this Monoku! Congrats on your trophy win. ~ Down Memory Lane, Gershon

Sunshine Smile

Date: 8/29/2020 1:20:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Harry :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2020 11:01:00 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Harry . Congratulations on your win.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2020 4:33:00 AM

Progressing to old age. Always sad to think of this, Harry. You wrote it well -- Congrats on your win! Hugs, Carolyn

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 3:43:00 AM

Such is life Harry... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/23/2016 3:57:00 AM

Congrats Harry, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 3:36:00 PM

I LOVE this. last bastion of bliss. OH MY. You know this theme so well, my friend!

JAN ALLISON

Date: 7/17/2016 6:22:00 PM

many congrats on your win Harry:-) hugs Jan xx

SKAT A

Date: 7/17/2016 5:17:00 PM

harry, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2012 5:33:00 PM

another one from the past. Love this one. Says so much in so few words.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/20/2010 5:33:00 PM

congrats on your win. ~Always&Forever Lynette

deb radke

Date: 12/16/2010 8:22:00 PM

It does feel this way at times, does it not? Would we remain in youth, if we could, or is youth all the sweeter as we remember... Interesting questions you bring to mind with this well-written monoku. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.. Sara

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 9:00:00 AM

You are so right, Harry. Sometimes I wonder if this is progress...except to the grave. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 8:58:00 AM

love it, congrats on your win in the contest Harry

Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Harry! Peace and Joy! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 4:06:00 AM

Congratulations Harry on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

nette onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:45:00 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:59:00 PM

Yep, I get this one a hundred percent. Congratulations, harry!

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 12/14/2010 7:50:00 PM

Congrats Harry on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line my friend.. enjoy another sweet top ten victory with luv...

john freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 6:08:00 PM

Harry, congratulations on a worthy poem's honored presentation in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 2:55:00 PM

Many congratulations Harry on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James

Adell Foster

Date: 12/9/2010 4:08:00 AM

Harry, this is a very witty monoku, if one has experience a blissful youth one tends to revisit the happy times, it is okay as long as one remembers to continue moving forward in a postive and progessive manner. This ia indeed a brilliant write ;-) Best wishes in the contest ~ Always, Adell

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 7:46:00 AM

We take a few steps backward each year when it comes to finding bliss. Children know the most happiness! Best wishes in Constance's contest, Harry. Love, Carolyn